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WHISPERS OF YOUR SOUL

WHISPERS OF YOUR SOUL Gentle voice within-- murmurs to shake my thoughts carrying me to a lair of lavenders and roses as the wind sways choir with an echo painting poses it matches the twinkling stars in their bright tons of shots I shut my eyes from around to listen in silence Hugging myself in surrender to ardent breeze of remember tender are the words seeping slow in my heart's chamber freeing me from dangling touches of conflict and shyness Candy wrapped around these whispers permits me to move for like a laughing water, it's lapping, caresses my ears. ah! how it melt my tangled threads of salad fears! Arising above to display an open jolly groove, I breathe an ounce to utter a single prayer to forever beget these nectarine whispers where to timeless counts of thorns, I may not shiver instead-- before despair, I will stand for I'm spared. Upon twin trial pools of impossibles, embrace my heart; oh! embrace my soul Answer my yearning; fill me whole for if I twine with you, I am unstoppable... ! ©O. E. Guillermo 10:24 pm, December 14, 2014 Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle Contest Name: Whispers Of Your Soul Placed 1st

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Date: 1/15/2015 10:57:00 PM
thank you for the reply...((regarding the bottom reply))
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Date: 1/13/2015 11:38:00 PM
to be one with god,,,,,,,,congratulations on the fine win!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2015 8:45:00 AM
thanks much. :) God bless us all.. :)!
Date: 1/12/2015 6:32:00 PM
Lovely to see you in first place Olive. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/12/2015 8:49:00 PM
thanks much Debbie.. :)! God bless you always.. :D!
Date: 1/11/2015 9:54:00 PM
Olive, congrats...PD
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Date: 1/12/2015 8:31:00 PM
Thanks LOlly Linda.. :)! mwah!
Date: 1/10/2015 12:46:00 PM
Wow, your expressive write celebrates the connection of abiding faith and enduring love.. I'm nothing short of taken! Congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:45:00 AM
Thanks much Dave.. :)! mmmmn you are a good writer too.. :)!
Date: 1/10/2015 9:42:00 AM
Hi Olive, I'm stopping by again. I forgot to rate this a 7. (I'm just getting into the concept of rating, using their system.) I enjoyed your brilliant poem. Earl
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:43:00 AM
thanks much Earl.. :)! GOd bless us always and we keep writing anyhow.. :)
Date: 1/10/2015 3:10:00 AM
So happy to see you perched on top. Very well deserved with this gentle write that touches the soul. Congrats Ron
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:43:00 AM
thanks much ROn.. :)! I appreciate your drop by God bless you always.. :)!
Date: 1/9/2015 3:05:00 PM
Hiiiii Olive_eloi!!:)) Congratulations!!!! Love & Faith combine to bring about a winning combination. I knew I would be back to salute a big and merited win. Well done! A special treat? Hmmmm...roses and chocs!:) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:18:00 AM
thanks much PAul.. :)! Appreciate your drop by..:)!
Date: 1/9/2015 2:42:00 PM
Olive,congratulation on your beautiful poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:15:00 AM
Thanks mcuh Eve and to you as well.. :)! GBU
Date: 1/9/2015 12:44:00 PM
Hi Olive, Beautiful! Very compelling poem. Beautiful win also. It couldn't happen to a nicer person. I'm happy for you. Great job. Take care. Earl
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:14:00 AM
Thanks much Earl I appreciate your drop by. ;)! God bless you always.. :)!
Date: 1/9/2015 10:53:00 AM
So sweet Olive,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:11:00 AM
thanks muck Kayod.. :)! Appreciate it much,. :D
Date: 1/9/2015 10:51:00 AM
Beautiful write Olive many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2015 3:10:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. :) hugs back.. :)!
Date: 1/9/2015 10:27:00 AM
soulful write, congrats on the win, Olive
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Date: 1/10/2015 4:14:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!
Date: 1/9/2015 10:04:00 AM
So beautifully breathtaking, Olive! Congratulations on your deserved 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/10/2015 4:11:00 AM
thanks much Sandra.. GBU
Date: 1/9/2015 9:36:00 AM
Your words are breath taking, Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 1/10/2015 4:11:00 AM
thanks much MAurice.. :)!
Date: 12/17/2014 1:53:00 PM
Being one with the Lord is what your heart yearns for. Nothing else really matters. This is lovely and gentle on the mind, touches the soul and fills the heart with loving emotions. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 7:59:00 AM
Thanks much Dearie PAul.. :) You know very well that I love Him so.. :) I hope you are well now.. :)! Missing you and hugs.. :)!
Date: 12/17/2014 4:13:00 AM
truly very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 12/18/2014 7:57:00 AM
Thanks much Liam.. :)! I appreciate your gentle drop by and taking time to comment on my poem. :)! GOd bless you.. :)!
Date: 12/15/2014 6:31:00 PM
You had me at the title, Olive.. If God be for us then who can be against us!
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:07:00 AM
Indeed Dave.. :)! thanks much..:)!
Date: 12/15/2014 2:34:00 PM
One plus one is definitely greater than two . . . strong, brave, and courageous are words of the soul!! Nicely done!
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:02:00 AM
thanks much David.. :)! I appreciate it.. :)! God bless you.. :)!
Date: 12/15/2014 1:24:00 PM
I so love the title of this poem Olive, and for the poem, it's dreamy, beautiful, and a loving heart being shared. The last line is explosive. Most definitely a 7, to my favourites it goes <;-)> James :) :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:32:00 AM
it is inspired by Gail's contest.. plus the talks in between the lines.... :) Thanks for the encoutaging comments . :) anf making it a fave wow!!!!!
Date: 12/15/2014 10:01:00 AM
Beautiful whispers of love and courage, Olive, with eloquent words written! I know Gail is going to love this...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:10:00 AM
thanks Rhonda for your comments. Indeed when I do meditate I am engulfed with such feelings.. i appreciate you drop by.. :)