Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Whispers of Your Soul

WHISPERS OF YOUR SOUL


Gentle voice within-- murmurs to shake my thoughts
carrying me to a lair of lavenders and roses
as the wind sways choir with an echo painting poses
it matches the twinkling stars in their bright tons of shots

I shut my eyes from around to listen in silence
Hugging myself in surrender to ardent breeze of remember
tender are the words seeping slow in my heart's chamber
freeing me from dangling touches of conflict and shyness

Candy wrapped around these whispers permits me to move
for like a laughing water, it's lapping, caresses my ears.
ah! how it melt my tangled threads of salad fears!
Arising above to display an open jolly groove,

I breathe an ounce to utter a single prayer
to forever beget these nectarine whispers
where to timeless counts of thorns, I may not shiver
instead-- before despair, I will stand for I'm spared.

Upon twin trial pools of impossibles,
embrace my heart; oh! embrace my soul
Answer my yearning; fill me whole
for if I twine with you, I am unstoppable... !

©O. E. Guillermo
10:24 pm, December 14, 2014

Sponsor:	Gail Angel Doyle
Contest Name:	Whispers Of Your Soul
Placed 1st

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Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 10:57 PM thank you for the reply...((regarding the bottom reply))

Dr. Vandana Sharma January 13, 2015 at 11:38 PM to be one with god,,,,,,,,congratulations on the fine win!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 14, 2015 at 8:45 AM thanks much. :) God bless us all.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi January 12, 2015 at 6:32 PM Lovely to see you in first place Olive. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 12, 2015 at 8:49 PM thanks much Debbie.. :)! God bless you always.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:54 PM Olive, congrats...PD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 12, 2015 at 8:31 PM Thanks LOlly Linda.. :)! mwah!

Earl Schumacker January 10, 2015 at 9:42 AM Hi Olive, I'm stopping by again. I forgot to rate this a 7. (I'm just getting into the concept of rating, using their system.) I enjoyed your brilliant poem. Earl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:43 AM thanks much Earl.. :)! GOd bless us always and we keep writing anyhow.. :)

Paul Callus January 9, 2015 at 3:05 PM Hiiiii Olive_eloi!!:)) Congratulations!!!! Love & Faith combine to bring about a winning combination. I knew I would be back to salute a big and merited win. Well done! A special treat? Hmmmm...roses and chocs!:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:18 AM thanks much PAul.. :)! Appreciate your drop by..:)!

Eve Roper January 9, 2015 at 2:42 PM Olive,congratulation on your beautiful poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:15 AM Thanks mcuh Eve and to you as well.. :)! GBU

Earl Schumacker January 9, 2015 at 12:44 PM Hi Olive, Beautiful! Very compelling poem. Beautiful win also. It couldn't happen to a nicer person. I'm happy for you. Great job. Take care. Earl Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:14 AM Thanks much Earl I appreciate your drop by. ;)! God bless you always.. :)!

Kayod5 Kayode January 9, 2015 at 10:53 AM So sweet Olive,congrats on the win...huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:11 AM thanks muck Kayod.. :)! Appreciate it much,. :D

Jan Allison January 9, 2015 at 10:51 AM Beautiful write Olive many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 11, 2015 at 3:10 AM thanks much JAn.. :) hugs back.. :)!

Dr.Ram Mehta January 9, 2015 at 10:27 AM soulful write, congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:14 AM thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!

Sandra Haight January 9, 2015 at 10:04 AM So beautifully breathtaking, Olive! Congratulations on your deserved 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:11 AM thanks much Sandra.. GBU

Maurice Yvonne January 9, 2015 at 9:36 AM Your words are breath taking, Congratulations on your first place win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 10, 2015 at 4:11 AM thanks much MAurice.. :)!

Paul Callus December 17, 2014 at 1:53 PM Being one with the Lord is what your heart yearns for. Nothing else really matters. This is lovely and gentle on the mind, touches the soul and fills the heart with loving emotions. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 18, 2014 at 7:59 AM Thanks much Dearie PAul.. :) You know very well that I love Him so.. :) I hope you are well now.. :)! Missing you and hugs.. :)!

Liam Mcdaid December 17, 2014 at 4:13 AM truly very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen dear friend Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 18, 2014 at 7:57 AM Thanks much Liam.. :)! I appreciate your gentle drop by and taking time to comment on my poem. :)! GOd bless you.. :)!

David Meade December 15, 2014 at 2:34 PM One plus one is definitely greater than two . . . strong, brave, and courageous are words of the soul!! Nicely done! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 17, 2014 at 3:02 AM thanks much David.. :)! I appreciate it.. :)! God bless you.. :)!

James Fraser December 15, 2014 at 1:24 PM I so love the title of this poem Olive, and for the poem, it's dreamy, beautiful, and a loving heart being shared. The last line is explosive. Most definitely a 7, to my favourites it goes <;-)> James :) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2014 at 6:32 AM it is inspired by Gail's contest.. plus the talks in between the lines.... :) Thanks for the encoutaging comments . :) anf making it a fave wow!!!!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 15, 2014 at 10:01 AM Beautiful whispers of love and courage, Olive, with eloquent words written! I know Gail is going to love this...hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 16, 2014 at 6:10 AM thanks Rhonda for your comments. Indeed when I do meditate I am engulfed with such feelings.. i appreciate you drop by.. :)