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Whispers of Your Soul

WHISPERS OF YOUR SOUL


Gentle voice within-- murmurs to shake my thoughts
carrying me to a lair of lavenders and roses
as the wind sways choir with an echo painting poses
it matches the twinkling stars in their bright tons of shots

I shut my eyes from around to listen in silence
Hugging myself in surrender to ardent breeze of remember
tender are the words seeping slow in my heart's chamber
freeing me from dangling touches of conflict and shyness

Candy wrapped around these whispers permits me to move
for like a laughing water, it's lapping, caresses my ears.
ah! how it melt my tangled threads of salad fears!
Arising above to display an open jolly groove,

I breathe an ounce to utter a single prayer
to forever beget these nectarine whispers
where to timeless counts of thorns, I may not shiver
instead-- before despair, I will stand for I'm spared.

Upon twin trial pools of impossibles,
embrace my heart; oh! embrace my soul
Answer my yearning; fill me whole
for if I twine with you, I am unstoppable... !

©O. E. Guillermo
10:24 pm, December 14, 2014

Sponsor:	Gail Angel Doyle
Contest Name:	Whispers Of Your Soul
Placed 1st

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:57:00 PM

thank you for the reply...((regarding the bottom reply))

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 1/13/2015 11:38:00 PM

to be one with god,,,,,,,,congratulations on the fine win!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/14/2015 8:45:00 AM

thanks much. :) God bless us all.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2015 6:32:00 PM

Lovely to see you in first place Olive. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/12/2015 8:49:00 PM

thanks much Debbie.. :)! God bless you always.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 9:54:00 PM

Olive, congrats...PD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/12/2015 8:31:00 PM

Thanks LOlly Linda.. :)! mwah!

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/10/2015 9:42:00 AM

Hi Olive, I'm stopping by again. I forgot to rate this a 7. (I'm just getting into the concept of rating, using their system.) I enjoyed your brilliant poem. Earl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:43:00 AM

thanks much Earl.. :)! GOd bless us always and we keep writing anyhow.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/9/2015 3:05:00 PM

Hiiiii Olive_eloi!!:)) Congratulations!!!! Love & Faith combine to bring about a winning combination. I knew I would be back to salute a big and merited win. Well done! A special treat? Hmmmm...roses and chocs!:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:18:00 AM

thanks much PAul.. :)! Appreciate your drop by..:)!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/9/2015 2:42:00 PM

Olive,congratulation on your beautiful poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:15:00 AM

Thanks mcuh Eve and to you as well.. :)! GBU

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/9/2015 12:44:00 PM

Hi Olive, Beautiful! Very compelling poem. Beautiful win also. It couldn't happen to a nicer person. I'm happy for you. Great job. Take care. Earl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:14:00 AM

Thanks much Earl I appreciate your drop by. ;)! God bless you always.. :)!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/9/2015 10:53:00 AM

So sweet Olive,congrats on the win...huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:11:00 AM

thanks muck Kayod.. :)! Appreciate it much,. :D

Jan Allison

Date: 1/9/2015 10:51:00 AM

Beautiful write Olive many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/11/2015 3:10:00 AM

thanks much JAn.. :) hugs back.. :)!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/9/2015 10:27:00 AM

soulful write, congrats on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:14:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram.. :)!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/9/2015 10:04:00 AM

So beautifully breathtaking, Olive! Congratulations on your deserved 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:11:00 AM

thanks much Sandra.. GBU

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/9/2015 9:36:00 AM

Your words are breath taking, Congratulations on your first place win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/10/2015 4:11:00 AM

thanks much MAurice.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/17/2014 1:53:00 PM

Being one with the Lord is what your heart yearns for. Nothing else really matters. This is lovely and gentle on the mind, touches the soul and fills the heart with loving emotions. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 7:59:00 AM

Thanks much Dearie PAul.. :) You know very well that I love Him so.. :) I hope you are well now.. :)! Missing you and hugs.. :)!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/17/2014 4:13:00 AM

truly very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen dear friend

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/18/2014 7:57:00 AM

Thanks much Liam.. :)! I appreciate your gentle drop by and taking time to comment on my poem. :)! GOd bless you.. :)!

David Meade

Date: 12/15/2014 2:34:00 PM

One plus one is definitely greater than two . . . strong, brave, and courageous are words of the soul!! Nicely done!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/17/2014 3:02:00 AM

thanks much David.. :)! I appreciate it.. :)! God bless you.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 12/15/2014 1:24:00 PM

I so love the title of this poem Olive, and for the poem, it's dreamy, beautiful, and a loving heart being shared. The last line is explosive. Most definitely a 7, to my favourites it goes <;-)> James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/16/2014 6:32:00 AM

it is inspired by Gail's contest.. plus the talks in between the lines.... :) Thanks for the encoutaging comments . :) anf making it a fave wow!!!!!