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Whispers Of Validation

A gifted lover who uses emotions as a bargaining chip. Tenacious in his grieving of a relationship that had so much potential. A thick black book what holds the libido of lovers clinged together at a most unholy hour is his collection of conquests. She would gladly borrow virginity if it meant a commitment on his part. I've looked into the eyes of a promise I never meant and I can feel it's consequences creeping up as I prepare for the end of this journey.

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Date: 11/28/2023 4:14:00 PM
with all sincerity, I found your poem outstanding. The image of the thick black book as his collection of conquests was a meaningful image. The poem does 'whisper' of the narrator's realization, his own personal validation. Marvelous, Yann. Sara...ps sending you your soup mail tomorrow (Wed) ...was gone all day. Have a great evening, Sara
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