Whispers of the Soul

Statuette she is in deep thought.
A monument of strength gathered from anguish and heartache.
She sighs as she murmurs what distresses.
As tears flow freely, her heart is exposed.
He is aloof watching her.
He deciphers the cold world that milieus.
He will not encroach.
The streetlights effervescently disclosed her observer.

A sensitive core possesses her inner being.
Her soul is shown so easily.
She continues to hear hysteria even when it has stopped.
Her footsteps are on a lethargic path.
The clock on wall ticks.
She is exhausted from the hits of people that tell her the truth.
Her life is a mess.
Whispers are heard from yesteryear.
She reminisces.
Her life was once of edict and control.
Nevertheless, today she is of discourse to address all the wrong done.
Ascertain, an atmosphere exist as her depth breathes.
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Penned on December 19, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/26/2015 4:59:00 PM
Verlena, :):0:)Linda
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/15/2015 3:06:00 AM
Thanks... Verlena
Date: 1/12/2015 12:20:00 PM
Whether that is you writing in the third person, or about someone else, I cannot tell. Heavy with distress.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 1/12/2015 12:39:00 PM
It is a poetry entry into the contest. The mood is in third person about a fictional character. Thanks for your response... Verlena
Date: 12/28/2014 6:54:00 AM
Wow. That is a deep poem. Very original. Hey verlena did you judge green eye-monster yet?
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Skylisha Vasquez
Date: 12/29/2014 6:34:00 PM
Thank you. Have a happy holiday!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/29/2014 6:32:00 PM
No yet but will in the next coming week or by January 10, 2015 this winners well be posted... Verlena
Date: 12/25/2014 10:15:00 PM
Love it, Verlena, Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/26/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thanks PD. I wish you a wonderful holiday and peace on earth... Verlena
Date: 12/21/2014 9:17:00 AM
This is beautiful yet sad too. Expressive and deep; love the final stanza. // May you have a joyous Christmas and all the best for 2015. // paul ps. sorry, missed entry to your contest..found it had closed:(
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/23/2014 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Paul for your superlative remarks... Never mind, you catch the next one... Verlena
Date: 12/20/2014 7:42:00 AM
It's really touchy and soulful write, good luck in the contest, Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 12/23/2014 11:59:00 AM
thanks dr. ram... verlena
Date: 12/20/2014 4:51:00 AM
so deep and sad - a very touching write verlena - good luck:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/23/2014 12:00:00 PM
thanks jan for your comments... Sending a hug and a smile, Verlena.
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