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Whispers of the Prairie

Out where the cottonwoods lean on the breeze, and rivers carve songs through the sage, a lone rider hums to the hush of the trees, an echo of some other age. His boots wear the dust of a thousand trails, his hat wears the weight of the sun, but his heart still believes in wide-open tales, and dreams in the key of a gun. The campfires remember the names that he spoke, the horses still answer his sigh, and somewhere beyond where the prairie smoke broke, the past rides eternal and high.

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Date: 4/30/2025 3:53:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive with great rhyming. Set this to music, and I will bet it will be a big hit.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert! I’m truly honored by your words--and what a wonderful thought, setting it to music! I’ll have to tuck that idea away for a rainy day. I’m so glad you enjoyed the rhythm and imagery. With gratitude, Alesia
Date: 4/28/2025 6:21:00 PM
To be in harmony with your path, a Path that serves you the truth of your strength and joy is what this vivid poem evokes in my mind. The descriptions of relationship are very original and tangible Poetess. The metaphors are super smart, and picturesque...J.A.B.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Justin. Your words feel like a gentle wind across the tall grass--deeply grounding and full of insight. I’m honored that the metaphors and message resonated with you. To walk in harmony with one’s path is the very essence of what I hoped to capture. Warmest thanks, Alesia

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