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Written: August 10, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In their silence, the mountains stand tall. Guardians of secrets—protectors of all Their peaks reach high, touching the sky. A haven of serenity—where spirits can fly Before I let this night slip into dawn's lap, Let me embrace you, my love, with a tender clap. For the mountains, in their majestic grace, Nurture our spirits in their quiet space. Oh, how they whisper tales untold, Stories of ancient times, of warriors bold, Of love and loss, of triumph and defeat, The mountains hold secrets—so bittersweet. Before I let this night slip away, Let me hold you close; let our love sway. For the mountains cognize a love so deep, That even the stars envy and weep. Let me love you more, my dear. Than any poet who writes with cheer, At random the moon and its lunar glow, Our love, my love, outshines all the sonnets that may flow. Mountains witness our passion embrace, They view passion in every trace. And understand the depth of our devotion. And how it fuels our hearts' endless motion. Before I let this night turn to dawn's light, Let me cherish you, my love, with all my might. For the mountains, in their silent ways, Remind us of love's eternal blaze. Whispers of the mountains, so gentle and kind, Guide us through life with love intertwined. Their wisdom—such ancient rivers, flows Leading us to where our hearts can glow. So, before I let this night slip away, Let me love you a little more, I pray. Mountains, in their silence, nurture the spirit. And in their presence—love finds its merit.

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Date: 8/10/2023 10:56:00 PM
Beautifully done, I've always lived in and loved the mountains that surround me - they surely are an inspiration, echoing love through each crevice, hope through each oak, wonder through each laurel and laughter through our dreams. So love your poem - it is an inspiration and so very beautiful. God bless you with love, Gina
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Date: 8/10/2023 4:46:00 PM
My friend this is an astoundingly beautiful poem! Truly a romantic masterpiece, which a great many superbly crafted verses. A true gem, a fav for me. God bless.
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