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Whispers of Love

Softly whisper in my ears Gently kiss away the tears While your lips explore my face Let me feel your warm embrace Softly whisper. ------------------------------------ Author: Paul Callus ~ 2nd April 2014 Contest: Whispers of Love Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2018 2:17:00 PM

What a lovely and sensuous poem. Marvelous.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/4/2018 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Line; your lovely comments are much appreciated. Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/27/2017 8:52:00 AM

Beauty indeed, Paul, Susan's poem led me to this, exactly when I am in the middle of writing a poem with the same phrase...talk about coincidence:)

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2017 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. I believe that all things happen for a reason...His reasoning! I am sure that your 'whispers of love' will also be a poetic success:) Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/22/2017 9:00:00 PM

Paul, such a great write. Silky words with the passionate warmth of cashmere. Breathtaking, sensual and romantic! Gorgeous poetry!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/27/2017 6:19:00 AM

The great mind surely belongs to you, Susan :) What you conjured is magical beauty...paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/24/2017 11:34:00 AM

Lol! Great minds... - well your's that is... I was thinking the very same thing after I wrote it. I'll see what I can conjure up...

Paul Callus
Date: 11/23/2017 4:11:00 PM

Thank you, Susan. I love your comments, especially "Silky words with the passionate warmth of cashmere"...these words could easily be the foundation stone for one of your awesome poems! Warm regards // paul

Robin Davis

Date: 6/19/2014 8:48:00 AM

Paul This is so passionately beautiful and touches the heart with love and compassion. Thank you for the great comment on my Path Of Hate poem.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/19/2014 10:19:00 AM

Hi Robin, thank you for the lovely comments; so glad you found this poem to your liking. Take care. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/20/2014 3:09:00 PM

lol i missed this poem :D kissing someone's tears is what i can say beyond loving.... sweet write.. :) ;) o worries Paul:)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Olive_eloi:)....but you did not miss this one! have a good look:) Glad you still like it :) // paul

Jayne Eggins

Date: 5/20/2014 9:53:00 AM

Oh Paul this is just beautiful, I can see you earned tenth place with it in a competition, congratulations...love Jayne x

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 10:10:00 AM

Thank you Jayne:) Of late I have been experimenting on short writes, gauging their effectiveness! Glad you liked it. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2014 4:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your well deserved 10th place, Paul - Love it !!! - Have a great day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 8:00:00 AM

Many thanks Anne Lise. Loved your romantic winning entry too. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/19/2014 11:01:00 PM

Very lovely write Paul ! sublime whispers,,, touch the soul << congrats on huge win !

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 7:50:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments and congrats DR! I loved your winning contribution :) // paul

Tim Smith

Date: 5/19/2014 9:24:00 PM

What a wonderful Rhyme Paul...congrats on the win....Tim

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Tim; mine was just a short contribution; congrats on you top podium. // paul

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/16/2014 11:13:00 AM

Well this is very nice Paul :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/16/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thank you Debbie; glad you like it :) cu around. // paul

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/10/2014 2:58:00 AM

Hey Paul, how are things? Luv the poem. Why, it's poetic :) Dropping by to say hello. Peace mel

Paul Callus
Date: 4/10/2014 4:37:00 AM

Hi Mel, good to see you on here again; our paths will surely cross again :) peace with you too. // paul

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/6/2014 12:08:00 PM

Breathtaking.......again, so much said, in so few words....not an easy task, but you have made it shine! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/6/2014 12:35:00 PM

Carrie you're a gem! what lovely remarks :) thank you for stopping by; always welcome. :) // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 4/6/2014 12:10:00 AM

Excellent passionate write this is my dear friend Paul. A winner for me. Thank u so much for sharing! I like it and so enjoyed reading it today. Good luck in the contest! Have a nice weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus
Date: 4/6/2014 9:07:00 AM

Leonora how can I thank you for your encouraging remarks!!? You have a way with words :) thank you for the wishes and hope that you too are having a lovely weekend. :) /x/ paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/5/2014 3:03:00 PM

Luxurious passion in this one..Reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 4/6/2014 9:01:00 AM

Very kind of you Sara :) glad you enjoyed it. hope it does well :) // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2014 2:59:00 PM

Dear Paul, Oh, this is so beautiful and succinct. How wonderful it is to have someone who can kiss away your tears. Love the poem and wish you success in the contest. Thanks for your comment as well. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 3:26:00 PM

Many thanks Carolyn; your comments are most welcome and appreciated. // your poem was very heartfelt...moving. God bless. // paul

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/5/2014 2:57:00 PM

I really loved this one. I wish you the best in the contest. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 3:22:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla, both for nice comment and best wishes :) // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2014 8:08:00 AM

- Paul, so romantic and sweet in a few lines - Love it - Good luck in the contest!! - Have a nice weekend. - Thanks for visiting my suggestion for the same contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 8:51:00 AM

Many many thanks Anne Lise. Sweet of you to drop by. // have a nice weekend too. :) // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2014 1:03:00 AM

wow, this is so nice!! wish I had written this one . I just don't know if I have the time to try this one but I sure love yours.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 5:19:00 AM

Wow! Andrea these comments are lovely and very welcome...coming from an esteemed visitor:):) // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/5/2014 12:07:00 AM

Great poem!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 5:14:00 AM

Thank you Arthur; welcome to visit anytime. // paul

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 4/4/2014 11:50:00 PM

Gorgeous write, sweet nothings. Good luck!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 5:12:00 AM

Thank you A.E. for visiting and for nice comments. // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/4/2014 5:51:00 PM

this thunders out its message Paul fabulous write gl in contest hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 4/5/2014 3:49:00 AM

Thank you for the positive comments SH, as well for wishes and Hugs :) // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/3/2014 8:53:00 AM

This is what I call a loud whisper. Eloquently expressed my friend, the romantic message is loud and clear.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2014 9:21:00 AM

Hi Richard; glad you like this, and thank you for the positive feedback. // paul

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 4/3/2014 3:39:00 AM

Short is sincere, Paul like her whispers in your ear. Hope you do well in the competition. Alofas, Tiaua

Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2014 9:19:00 AM

Thank you Tiaua for stopping by and leaving your lovely comments and for the wishes :) // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/2/2014 7:26:00 PM

beautiful romantic write Paul. Good luck with the competition. Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2014 9:01:00 AM

Glad you like it Jan; thank you for the lovely comments and wishes. :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/2/2014 3:18:00 PM

:D whisper hush the whisper.....( i love those short sweet whispers make my heart healthier :D?! hahhaha... ) what can i say but wow!!!! :D :D :D -===== olive _eloi with a whisper of God blessings for you.. :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/2/2014 3:28:00 PM

Olive_eloi, I can just hear you whispering...hush...glad your heart is better:) thank you for the lovely comments and the whisper of blessings :) // paul