Whispers of Love

Sitting alone in the sand, witness the sun kissing the horizon. 
I hear the sound of angels, whispering love from above. 
I thought of the first time I held your hands in my palms 
And heard you cry, the sweetest whisper of joy in my heart. 

But this eternal distance seems so hard to reach, 
You have left me hanging in a bliss. 
Feeling the soft touch of the breeze. 
As it whispers goodbye, the last word you'd said. 

Tears are gently falling on my cheeks. 
As wind blew, I heard the lullaby I sang for you. 
Haunt me with memories that won't fade away. 
Wishing you're here beside me to fill this empty soul. 

But you're gone, no matter how hard I try. 
I couldn't recall the image of your smile. 
The echo of your laugh, twinkle of your eyes. 
'twas left inside the room that you left behind. 

I send a prayer, a whisper of hope in the wind. 
Wishing that you hear it in a place where you are. 
Please open the gate of sky, and hear me saying, 
Whispering the love from my heart, my little angel.  
 


* RANK 1 in Gail's Contest WHISPERS OF LOVE*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/21/2014 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations Aiyah:) galing galing nman!!! :D heartwarming and lil sad write... :) GBU
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/21/2014 10:11:00 AM
Ei... thanks sweet Olive for your time sending this warm greetings... :O))
Date: 5/20/2014 5:45:00 AM
Amazing write Aiyah ! loved the most ,, extremely ewmotional n heartfelt ,,, congrats on huge win dear !
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/20/2014 7:58:00 AM
A million thanks I send back to you, Dr. Upma... :O)) My pleasure to always have your comment on my poem... A big honor on my part... :O))) THanks a lot!!! ^_^
Date: 5/20/2014 3:15:00 AM
- A pleasure and honor to share first place in Gail's contest with you - Congratulations my friend, AiyaH !!! - Have a nice day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/20/2014 7:54:00 AM
Anne... I'm so happy that we are on the top win list in Gail's contest.... my pleasure to be w/ you in one prestigious event here in Psoup. At first ,it's just a dream ...now, it's being happened... And it made me the happiest one... ^_^ Thanks a lot ,my dearest friend... wanna give you a million hugs... !!! :O)))
Date: 5/19/2014 7:25:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win....Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/20/2014 7:48:00 AM
Hi Tim!!!! WOoooow... I'm so happy to be w/ you on a top win list in Gail's contest!!! .. Congratz ,too!!! ^_^
Date: 5/19/2014 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful poem, and beautiful win. Well done beautiful girl!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/20/2014 7:44:00 AM
Casarah.... your heart is what makes you beautiful... Thanks a lot!!! :O))
Date: 5/19/2014 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations AiyaH on a deserved top Podium !! A sad but beautiful poem; very heartfelt. // paul
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/20/2014 7:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Sir!!! ...My pleasure to share this utmost happiness on my win in Gail's contest... :O))
Date: 3/31/2014 11:10:00 AM
A poem thay makes my eyes water and thoat stiffen up. A piem of longing, I hear the sadness in your words. A piwerful write. Great write! Xoxo :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/2/2014 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!! ..your comment is a treasure ..!! :o'))
Date: 3/30/2014 2:15:00 AM
A soul opening poem. J.A.B.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:42:00 AM
Thanks J.A.B ;'))
Date: 3/29/2014 8:32:00 PM
beautifully written, aiyah! Galing talaga ng pinay!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:34:00 AM
Yes we are!!! ..and not only Pinays... but all our Souperfriends here... !!! :'))
Date: 3/29/2014 2:50:00 AM
Hi AiyaH, a lovely poem. , I love the soft, honest imagery falling on your cheeks. The reflection and the path you pour on your poem, moved me into tears. My friend, this is beautiful, and heartfelt. It's my kind of poetry. The images and pictures you created are beautiful, ... Like the sun kissing the horizon..... Thank you for sharing your poetry, always~ Linda
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:37:00 AM
Pd.. I so love your comment... you made my heart so happy dear... glad that I've found you and you opened your path to our friendship... I treasure you in my heart!! ^__^ oxoxoxo
Date: 3/28/2014 9:46:00 PM
These words resonated within my heart and took me to a place far far away, between reality and fantasy. Love can leave a sour taste
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/30/2014 9:36:00 AM
Oh Kee... what a splendid comment... Thanks a lot!!! hugs.. ^__^
Date: 3/27/2014 8:08:00 PM
This is beautiful Aiyah...Tim
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/28/2014 7:25:00 AM
Hi Tim... I'm glad that you liked my poem... !! :'O)) Have a nice day, 'hon!!! ^_^_
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