Whispers of Love

Sitting alone in the sand, witness the sun kissing the horizon. 
I hear the sound of angels, whispering love from above. 
I thought of the first time I held your hands in my palms 
And heard you cry, the sweetest whisper of joy in my heart. 

But this eternal distance seems so hard to reach, 
You have left me hanging in a bliss. 
Feeling the soft touch of the breeze. 
As it whispers goodbye, the last word you'd said. 

Tears are gently falling on my cheeks. 
As wind blew, I heard the lullaby I sang for you. 
Haunt me with memories that won't fade away. 
Wishing you're here beside me to fill this empty soul. 

But you're gone, no matter how hard I try. 
I couldn't recall the image of your smile. 
The echo of your laugh, twinkle of your eyes. 
'twas left inside the room that you left behind. 

I send a prayer, a whisper of hope in the wind. 
Wishing that you hear it in a place where you are. 
Please open the gate of sky, and hear me saying, 
Whispering the love from my heart, my little angel.  
 


* RANK 1 in Gail's Contest WHISPERS OF LOVE*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 3:13 AM
Congratulations Aiyah:) galing galing nman!!! :D heartwarming and lil sad write... :) GBU
Torres Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Ei... thanks sweet Olive for your time sending this warm greetings... :O))
A. Sharma Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:45 AM
Amazing write Aiyah ! loved the most ,, extremely ewmotional n heartfelt ,,, congrats on huge win dear !
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:58 AM
A million thanks I send back to you, Dr. Upma... :O)) My pleasure to always have your comment on my poem... A big honor on my part... :O))) THanks a lot!!! ^_^
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 3:15 AM
- A pleasure and honor to share first place in Gail's contest with you - Congratulations my friend, AiyaH !!! - Have a nice day! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:54 AM
Anne... I'm so happy that we are on the top win list in Gail's contest.... my pleasure to be w/ you in one prestigious event here in Psoup. At first ,it's just a dream ...now, it's being happened... And it made me the happiest one... ^_^ Thanks a lot ,my dearest friend... wanna give you a million hugs... !!! :O)))
Smith Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:25 PM
Congrats on your fine win....Tim
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:48 AM
Hi Tim!!!! WOoooow... I'm so happy to be w/ you on a top win list in Gail's contest!!! .. Congratz ,too!!! ^_^
Nance Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Beautiful poem, and beautiful win. Well done beautiful girl!
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Casarah.... your heart is what makes you beautiful... Thanks a lot!!! :O))
Callus Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Congratulations AiyaH on a deserved top Podium !! A sad but beautiful poem; very heartfelt. // paul
Torres Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Thanks a lot, Sir!!! ...My pleasure to share this utmost happiness on my win in Gail's contest... :O))
Boskovski Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 11:10 AM
A poem thay makes my eyes water and thoat stiffen up. A piem of longing, I hear the sadness in your words. A piwerful write. Great write! Xoxo :)
Torres Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 2:24 PM
Thank you, Chris!! ..your comment is a treasure ..!! :o'))
Bordner Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 2:15 AM
A soul opening poem. J.A.B.
Torres Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Thanks J.A.B ;'))
Whispers Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 8:32 PM
beautifully written, aiyah! Galing talaga ng pinay!
Torres Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Yes we are!!! ..and not only Pinays... but all our Souperfriends here... !!! :'))
A   Avatar
March 29, 2014 at 2:50 AM
Hi AiyaH, a lovely poem. , I love the soft, honest imagery falling on your cheeks. The reflection and the path you pour on your poem, moved me into tears. My friend, this is beautiful, and heartfelt. It's my kind of poetry. The images and pictures you created are beautiful, ... Like the sun kissing the horizon..... Thank you for sharing your poetry, always~ Linda
Torres Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Pd.. I so love your comment... you made my heart so happy dear... glad that I've found you and you opened your path to our friendship... I treasure you in my heart!! ^__^ oxoxoxo
Greene Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 9:46 PM
These words resonated within my heart and took me to a place far far away, between reality and fantasy. Love can leave a sour taste
Torres Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Oh Kee... what a splendid comment... Thanks a lot!!! hugs.. ^__^
Smith Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:08 PM
This is beautiful Aiyah...Tim
Torres Avatar
March 28, 2014 at 7:25 AM
Hi Tim... I'm glad that you liked my poem... !! :'O)) Have a nice day, 'hon!!! ^_^_
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