Whispers of Love

The moon is close 
I can see it from our room
We lie together
Your breathe upon my skin
Our bodies may be old
But our minds forever young
Years have past 
And children grown old
Eternity spent in a moment
We begin again anew
With each whisper
Of I’ll always love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Charming, Stephen. A lovely read.
Mitchell Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:26 PM
i am wowed right at this moment and caught up in the hint of passion in this piece!great job
Kilmer Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:36 PM
Thanks April...love never grows old. Kilmer
Anglesey Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 3:55 PM
Lovely romantic feel with "an eternity spent in a moments" Simple, yet moving :)
Kilmer Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 4:15 PM
Thank you Karen - I always look forward to your comments. Kilmer
Kilmer Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 4:33 AM
Cherie, thank you. Your up awfully late or awfully early! I am up working unfortunately. thanks for your kind words. Kilmer
Thomas Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 4:27 AM
This is beautiful:)
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 1:00 PM
- Stephen, a beautiful poem. - Thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kilmer Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Anne-Lise, Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. oxox // SRK
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