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Whispers of Light

Melodic laughter floats on the breeze Fire light crackles and your eyes tease Escaping embers glow, like whispers of light They dance and hold us, this magical night Nothing between us, our souls exposed Twinkling stars - a new song composed Whispers of light, grow hot and untamed Tonight's promise, as of yet, un-named For years now, it's been this way Whispers of light, between us stay Love....... 2-9-2014 ©Donna Jones

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Annie Lander

Date: 12/23/2021 3:04:00 PM

nice one my friend. did you give up your poetry writing?

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/27/2014 9:55:00 AM

Beautiful poem and I see it won too. Big congrats!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 PM

DONNA, A beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA

Tim Smith

Date: 3/27/2014 6:23:00 PM

This totally captures the feelings of love Donna...Congratulations on the win :-):-) Tim

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM

Ahh thanks Tim....very sweet...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2014 12:09:00 PM

Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Sara...

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2014 8:16:00 PM

A lovely poem Donna..congrats on the win

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:57:00 PM

Well..we all won.sweet Gail....but thanks so much....it sure was fun participating...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/26/2014 10:06:00 AM

i am amazed, donns.. wow.. big cheers on your top win... huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:56:00 PM

Ahhh.nett..thanks....isn't Gail a doll...letting us all win....:-) :-) :-) she has the spirit and heart of an angel...pure love...thanks you much for the huggg..

David Mohn

Date: 3/26/2014 9:40:00 AM

Wonderful Donna :)

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:54:00 PM

Thanks again David...:-) :-)

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/23/2014 11:25:00 AM

Magical, enchanting.... Great effort Donna!

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:53:00 PM

Thanks Keith....I Gave it my best go..:-) :-) :-) sure had fun..these contest challenge me and all in fun and friendship I say..:-) :-) :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2014 8:42:00 AM

Excellent! Romantic and flowing...to the heart.

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:47:00 PM

Very nice thing to say Paul. Thank you..sir

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/21/2014 8:49:00 AM

In Olympic fashion, I'll rate it a ten. Such a tribute to the love of an "older" couple. From 1912 until 1948, the Pentathlon of the Muses was an Olympic event - writers, painters, sculptors, architects and musicians were included. I vote for a revival.

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:29:00 PM

I agree...so glad you enjoyed the poem...and thanks for the 10!!!!my first one I believe...awesome....:-) :-)

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/15/2014 12:43:00 PM

"7"!!!...nothing more needs to be said!//Sinclair

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:26:00 PM

Thanks very very much Sinclair..:-) :-)

David Mohn

Date: 2/14/2014 2:27:00 PM

Hi Donna Thanks for the comments on my poem:) Yours is exquisite!

Donna Jones
Date: 3/27/2014 10:19:00 PM

Thanks so much David. Appreciate it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/13/2014 8:33:00 PM

A very beautiful poem!!! Loved it

Donna Jones
Date: 2/14/2014 7:01:00 AM

Hello Arthur....thanks!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/13/2014 11:12:00 AM

happy hearts' day,donns!..:)

Donna Jones
Date: 2/14/2014 7:00:00 AM

Good day - happy day nette!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2014 7:40:00 AM

Try googling poems by Mama Bear, that should work.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/14/2014 6:59:00 AM

OK...:-) :-) :-) :-) told ya I'm not computer savvy long ago....:-) :-) :-) bet I find her today..I'm learning...

Adam -- Eve

Date: 2/13/2014 12:52:00 AM

Charming romance with soft secrets, and the patience to play with warming light...exquisite beauty in your poetry...

Donna Jones
Date: 2/14/2014 6:56:00 AM

That is a very beautiful comment..thank you..

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/12/2014 9:05:00 PM

Just those first words "melodic laughter" is enough to catch one's breath! Lovely!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 10:00:00 PM

That is kind of you Carrie...I love my husbands laugh...

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2014 8:17:00 PM

a whisper beats having nothing or beating a dead horse. waiting for divorce.

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 10:01:00 PM

You're a ray of sunshine...

Vera Duggan

Date: 2/12/2014 8:02:00 PM

Donna absolutely loved it, so romantic. Vera x

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:00:00 PM

Oh thank you vera

Joseph Sergi

Date: 2/12/2014 5:21:00 PM

Beautiful and Romantic work Donna!!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:47:00 PM

Appreciate that Joseph...thanks so much..:-) :-)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2014 12:42:00 PM

whispers still blowing in my mind, donns!.. hello and huggs!

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:56:00 PM

Good evening nette...hope that flu has flown!!!!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 2/11/2014 10:59:00 PM

Good work Donna... Romance is always a whisper away....Verlena

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:51:00 PM

Hello Verlena...nice to meet you....thank you very much...

Chuck Melugin

Date: 2/11/2014 7:39:00 PM

7 Whispers that can be heard around the world! I love this! my best, chuck

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:48:00 PM

Hey there chuck....thanks! :-) :-)

Daver Austin

Date: 2/11/2014 10:37:00 AM

Wonderful title - sets up the whole poem beautifully. Love, daver

Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:55:00 PM

Hey Daver....Gail's title..but glad you liked the poem...you should check out her contest..:-) :-)