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Whispers of Light

Melodic laughter floats on the breeze
Fire light crackles and your eyes tease
Escaping embers glow, like whispers of light
They dance and hold us, this magical night

Nothing between us, our souls exposed
Twinkling stars - a new song composed
Whispers of light, grow hot and untamed
Tonight's promise, as of yet, un-named

For years now, it's been this way
Whispers of light, between us stay

Love.......

2-9-2014
©Donna Jones

Copyright © Donna Jones | Year Posted 2014

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Annie Lander Date: 12/23/2021 3:04:00 PM nice one my friend. did you give up your poetry writing? Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 7/27/2014 9:55:00 AM Beautiful poem and I see it won too. Big congrats!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 PM DONNA, A beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 3/27/2014 6:23:00 PM This totally captures the feelings of love Donna...Congratulations on the win :-):-) Tim Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM Ahh thanks Tim....very sweet...

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/27/2014 12:09:00 PM Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM Thanks so much Sara...

Joseph May Date: 3/26/2014 8:16:00 PM A lovely poem Donna..congrats on the win Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:57:00 PM Well..we all won.sweet Gail....but thanks so much....it sure was fun participating...

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/26/2014 10:06:00 AM i am amazed, donns.. wow.. big cheers on your top win... huggs Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:56:00 PM Ahhh.nett..thanks....isn't Gail a doll...letting us all win....:-) :-) :-) she has the spirit and heart of an angel...pure love...thanks you much for the huggg..

David Mohn Date: 3/26/2014 9:40:00 AM Wonderful Donna :) Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:54:00 PM Thanks again David...:-) :-)

Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 3/23/2014 11:25:00 AM Magical, enchanting.... Great effort Donna! Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:53:00 PM Thanks Keith....I Gave it my best go..:-) :-) :-) sure had fun..these contest challenge me and all in fun and friendship I say..:-) :-) :-)

Paul Callus Date: 3/1/2014 8:42:00 AM Excellent! Romantic and flowing...to the heart. Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:47:00 PM Very nice thing to say Paul. Thank you..sir

Reason A. Poteet Date: 2/21/2014 8:49:00 AM In Olympic fashion, I'll rate it a ten. Such a tribute to the love of an "older" couple. From 1912 until 1948, the Pentathlon of the Muses was an Olympic event - writers, painters, sculptors, architects and musicians were included. I vote for a revival. Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:29:00 PM I agree...so glad you enjoyed the poem...and thanks for the 10!!!!my first one I believe...awesome....:-) :-)

Robert Rogers Date: 2/15/2014 12:43:00 PM "7"!!!...nothing more needs to be said!//Sinclair Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:26:00 PM Thanks very very much Sinclair..:-) :-)

David Mohn Date: 2/14/2014 2:27:00 PM Hi Donna Thanks for the comments on my poem:) Yours is exquisite! Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2014 10:19:00 PM Thanks so much David. Appreciate it.

Arthur Vaso Date: 2/13/2014 8:33:00 PM A very beautiful poem!!! Loved it Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/14/2014 7:01:00 AM Hello Arthur....thanks!

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/13/2014 11:12:00 AM happy hearts' day,donns!..:) Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/14/2014 7:00:00 AM Good day - happy day nette!

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/13/2014 7:40:00 AM Try googling poems by Mama Bear, that should work. Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/14/2014 6:59:00 AM OK...:-) :-) :-) :-) told ya I'm not computer savvy long ago....:-) :-) :-) bet I find her today..I'm learning...

Adam -- Eve Date: 2/13/2014 12:52:00 AM Charming romance with soft secrets, and the patience to play with warming light...exquisite beauty in your poetry... Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/14/2014 6:56:00 AM That is a very beautiful comment..thank you..

Carrie Richards Date: 2/12/2014 9:05:00 PM Just those first words "melodic laughter" is enough to catch one's breath! Lovely! Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 10:00:00 PM That is kind of you Carrie...I love my husbands laugh...

John Loving Iii Date: 2/12/2014 8:17:00 PM a whisper beats having nothing or beating a dead horse. waiting for divorce. Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 10:01:00 PM You're a ray of sunshine...

Vera Duggan Date: 2/12/2014 8:02:00 PM Donna absolutely loved it, so romantic. Vera x Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 9:00:00 PM Oh thank you vera

Joseph Sergi Date: 2/12/2014 5:21:00 PM Beautiful and Romantic work Donna!! Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 9:47:00 PM Appreciate that Joseph...thanks so much..:-) :-)

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/12/2014 12:42:00 PM whispers still blowing in my mind, donns!.. hello and huggs! Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 9:56:00 PM Good evening nette...hope that flu has flown!!!!

Verlena S. Walker Date: 2/11/2014 10:59:00 PM Good work Donna... Romance is always a whisper away....Verlena Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 9:51:00 PM Hello Verlena...nice to meet you....thank you very much...

Chuck Melugin Date: 2/11/2014 7:39:00 PM 7 Whispers that can be heard around the world! I love this! my best, chuck Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 9:48:00 PM Hey there chuck....thanks! :-) :-)

Daver Austin Date: 2/11/2014 10:37:00 AM Wonderful title - sets up the whole poem beautifully. Love, daver Login to Reply Donna Jones Date: 2/12/2014 9:55:00 PM Hey Daver....Gail's title..but glad you liked the poem...you should check out her contest..:-) :-)

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