Donna Jones Poet Rhyme

Whispers of Light

Melodic laughter floats on the breeze
Fire light crackles and your eyes tease
Escaping embers glow, like whispers of light
They dance and hold us, this magical night

Nothing between us, our souls exposed
Twinkling stars - a new song composed
Whispers of light, grow hot and untamed
Tonight's promise, as of yet, un-named

For years now, it's been this way
Whispers of light, between us stay

Love.......

2-9-2014
©Donna Jones

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Annie Lander December 23, 2021 at 3:04 PM nice one my friend. did you give up your poetry writing?

Robert Lindley July 27, 2014 at 9:55 AM Beautiful poem and I see it won too. Big congrats!!

Poet Destroyer A March 30, 2014 at 5:34 PM DONNA, A beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA

Tim Smith March 27, 2014 at 6:23 PM This totally captures the feelings of love Donna...Congratulations on the win :-):-) Tim Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 11:04 PM Ahh thanks Tim....very sweet...

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2014 at 12:09 PM Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 11:04 PM Thanks so much Sara...

Joseph May March 26, 2014 at 8:16 PM A lovely poem Donna..congrats on the win Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:57 PM Well..we all won.sweet Gail....but thanks so much....it sure was fun participating...

Nette Onclaud March 26, 2014 at 10:06 AM i am amazed, donns.. wow.. big cheers on your top win... huggs Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:56 PM Ahhh.nett..thanks....isn't Gail a doll...letting us all win....:-) :-) :-) she has the spirit and heart of an angel...pure love...thanks you much for the huggg..

David Mohn March 26, 2014 at 9:40 AM Wonderful Donna :) Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:54 PM Thanks again David...:-) :-)

Keith O.J. Hunt March 23, 2014 at 11:25 AM Magical, enchanting.... Great effort Donna! Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:53 PM Thanks Keith....I Gave it my best go..:-) :-) :-) sure had fun..these contest challenge me and all in fun and friendship I say..:-) :-) :-)

Paul Callus March 1, 2014 at 8:42 AM Excellent! Romantic and flowing...to the heart. Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:47 PM Very nice thing to say Paul. Thank you..sir

Reason A. Poteet February 21, 2014 at 8:49 AM In Olympic fashion, I'll rate it a ten. Such a tribute to the love of an "older" couple. From 1912 until 1948, the Pentathlon of the Muses was an Olympic event - writers, painters, sculptors, architects and musicians were included. I vote for a revival. Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:29 PM I agree...so glad you enjoyed the poem...and thanks for the 10!!!!my first one I believe...awesome....:-) :-)

Robert Rogers February 15, 2014 at 12:43 PM "7"!!!...nothing more needs to be said!//Sinclair Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:26 PM Thanks very very much Sinclair..:-) :-)

David Mohn February 14, 2014 at 2:27 PM Hi Donna Thanks for the comments on my poem:) Yours is exquisite! Donna Jones March 27, 2014 at 10:19 PM Thanks so much David. Appreciate it.

Arthur Vaso February 13, 2014 at 8:33 PM A very beautiful poem!!! Loved it Donna Jones February 14, 2014 at 7:01 AM Hello Arthur....thanks!

Nette Onclaud February 13, 2014 at 11:12 AM happy hearts' day,donns!..:) Donna Jones February 14, 2014 at 7:00 AM Good day - happy day nette!

Richard Lamoureux February 13, 2014 at 7:40 AM Try googling poems by Mama Bear, that should work. Donna Jones February 14, 2014 at 6:59 AM OK...:-) :-) :-) :-) told ya I'm not computer savvy long ago....:-) :-) :-) bet I find her today..I'm learning...

Adam -- Eve February 13, 2014 at 12:52 AM Charming romance with soft secrets, and the patience to play with warming light...exquisite beauty in your poetry... Donna Jones February 14, 2014 at 6:56 AM That is a very beautiful comment..thank you..

Carrie Richards February 12, 2014 at 9:05 PM Just those first words "melodic laughter" is enough to catch one's breath! Lovely! Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 10:00 PM That is kind of you Carrie...I love my husbands laugh...

John Loving Iii February 12, 2014 at 8:17 PM a whisper beats having nothing or beating a dead horse. waiting for divorce. Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 10:01 PM You're a ray of sunshine...

Vera Duggan February 12, 2014 at 8:02 PM Donna absolutely loved it, so romantic. Vera x Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 9:00 PM Oh thank you vera

Joseph Sergi February 12, 2014 at 5:21 PM Beautiful and Romantic work Donna!! Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 9:47 PM Appreciate that Joseph...thanks so much..:-) :-)

Nette Onclaud February 12, 2014 at 12:42 PM whispers still blowing in my mind, donns!.. hello and huggs! Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 9:56 PM Good evening nette...hope that flu has flown!!!!

Verlena S. Walker February 11, 2014 at 10:59 PM Good work Donna... Romance is always a whisper away....Verlena Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 9:51 PM Hello Verlena...nice to meet you....thank you very much...

Chuck Melugin February 11, 2014 at 7:39 PM 7 Whispers that can be heard around the world! I love this! my best, chuck Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 9:48 PM Hey there chuck....thanks! :-) :-)

Daver Austin February 11, 2014 at 10:37 AM Wonderful title - sets up the whole poem beautifully. Love, daver Donna Jones February 12, 2014 at 9:55 PM Hey Daver....Gail's title..but glad you liked the poem...you should check out her contest..:-) :-)

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