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Whispers Of Light

Melodic laughter floats on the breeze
Fire light crackles and your eyes tease
Escaping embers glow, like whispers of light
They dance and hold us, this magical night

Nothing between us, our souls exposed
Twinkling stars - a new song composed
Whispers of light, grow hot and untamed
Tonight's promise, as of yet, un-named

For years now, it's been this way
Whispers of light, between us stay

Love.......

2-9-2014
©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/27/2014 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful poem and I see it won too. Big congrats!!
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Date: 3/30/2014 5:34:00 PM
DONNA, A beautiful poem and win, :) Congratulations..... XOX ~ LINDA
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Date: 3/27/2014 6:23:00 PM
This totally captures the feelings of love Donna...Congratulations on the win :-):-) Tim
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM
Ahh thanks Tim....very sweet...
Date: 3/27/2014 12:09:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara...
Date: 3/26/2014 8:51:00 PM
Boom ! I'm crazy about this perfect poem that whispers love and shouts WINNER !
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:59:00 PM
Boom back atcha..... thanks a million........:-) :-) :-) :-)
Date: 3/26/2014 8:16:00 PM
A lovely poem Donna..congrats on the win
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:57:00 PM
Well..we all won.sweet Gail....but thanks so much....it sure was fun participating...
Date: 3/26/2014 10:06:00 AM
i am amazed, donns.. wow.. big cheers on your top win... huggs
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:56:00 PM
Ahhh.nett..thanks....isn't Gail a doll...letting us all win....:-) :-) :-) she has the spirit and heart of an angel...pure love...thanks you much for the huggg..
Date: 3/26/2014 9:40:00 AM
Wonderful Donna :)
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:54:00 PM
Thanks again David...:-) :-)
Date: 3/23/2014 11:25:00 AM
Magical, enchanting.... Great effort Donna!
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:53:00 PM
Thanks Keith....I Gave it my best go..:-) :-) :-) sure had fun..these contest challenge me and all in fun and friendship I say..:-) :-) :-)
Date: 3/1/2014 8:42:00 AM
Excellent! Romantic and flowing...to the heart.
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:47:00 PM
Very nice thing to say Paul. Thank you..sir
Date: 2/27/2014 2:02:00 PM
Wow! Truly well done!!
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:46:00 PM
Thanks so much dave..:-) :-)
Date: 2/21/2014 8:49:00 AM
In Olympic fashion, I'll rate it a ten. Such a tribute to the love of an "older" couple. From 1912 until 1948, the Pentathlon of the Muses was an Olympic event - writers, painters, sculptors, architects and musicians were included. I vote for a revival.
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:29:00 PM
I agree...so glad you enjoyed the poem...and thanks for the 10!!!!my first one I believe...awesome....:-) :-)
Date: 2/15/2014 12:43:00 PM
"7"!!!...nothing more needs to be said!//Sinclair
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:26:00 PM
Thanks very very much Sinclair..:-) :-)
Date: 2/14/2014 2:27:00 PM
Hi Donna Thanks for the comments on my poem:) Yours is exquisite!
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Date: 3/27/2014 10:19:00 PM
Thanks so much David. Appreciate it.
Date: 2/13/2014 8:33:00 PM
A very beautiful poem!!! Loved it
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Date: 2/14/2014 7:01:00 AM
Hello Arthur....thanks!
Date: 2/13/2014 11:12:00 AM
happy hearts' day,donns!..:)
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/14/2014 7:00:00 AM
Good day - happy day nette!
Date: 2/13/2014 7:40:00 AM
Try googling poems by Mama Bear, that should work.
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Date: 2/14/2014 6:59:00 AM
OK...:-) :-) :-) :-) told ya I'm not computer savvy long ago....:-) :-) :-) bet I find her today..I'm learning...
Date: 2/13/2014 12:52:00 AM
Charming romance with soft secrets, and the patience to play with warming light...exquisite beauty in your poetry...
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/14/2014 6:56:00 AM
That is a very beautiful comment..thank you..
Date: 2/12/2014 9:05:00 PM
Just those first words "melodic laughter" is enough to catch one's breath! Lovely!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 10:00:00 PM
That is kind of you Carrie...I love my husbands laugh...
Date: 2/12/2014 8:17:00 PM
a whisper beats having nothing or beating a dead horse. waiting for divorce.
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Date: 2/12/2014 10:01:00 PM
You're a ray of sunshine...
Date: 2/12/2014 8:02:00 PM
Donna absolutely loved it, so romantic. Vera x
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:00:00 PM
Oh thank you vera
Date: 2/12/2014 5:21:00 PM
Beautiful and Romantic work Donna!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:47:00 PM
Appreciate that Joseph...thanks so much..:-) :-)
Date: 2/12/2014 12:42:00 PM
whispers still blowing in my mind, donns!.. hello and huggs!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:56:00 PM
Good evening nette...hope that flu has flown!!!!
Date: 2/11/2014 10:59:00 PM
Good work Donna... Romance is always a whisper away....Verlena
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Date: 2/12/2014 9:51:00 PM
Hello Verlena...nice to meet you....thank you very much...
Date: 2/11/2014 7:39:00 PM
7 Whispers that can be heard around the world! I love this! my best, chuck
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2014 9:48:00 PM
Hey there chuck....thanks! :-) :-)
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