Whispers of Eternity

..And you say we're the radicals
This world is filled with answers
Open up your eyes
Throw all your manmade lies
I need no man to bring out the best in me
My life is on the run
like a whisper from eternity
I don't live by your rules
of the hand and mind


And I see the tide of the change
You made us to believe
That there is no hope
I'm not another victim to believe
There is still time to heed
Your'e so damn predictable
In everything that you do

And I see the tide of the change
I'm still here waiting for you
for you, and I wait so long for you, for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lee Sr. Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 11:26 AM
Ooh!!!, "Throw all your man made lies I need no man to bring out the best in me My life is on the run like a whisper from eternity I don't live by your rules Preach it, Sister of the hand and mind" being a man I'm not ashamed to agree with this passage. So true, so true, true that. There's praise in words and word in praise-Write On James ( Preach it, Sister )
Barulich Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 1:57 AM
Thank you James I appreciate all the feed back you did make me laugh from your lively comments :) I have a tune for this one it is a song I wrote awhile back. Thanks again.
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