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Whispers In the Waterfall

Misty morning blue
Glorious wet teardrops fall
Upon the rocks

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Doris Culverhouse

November 29, 2009 at 7:09 PM

nicely penned, interesting poem, keep sharing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 29, 2009 at 2:23 PM

Laura, This is a beautiful haiku. It reminds me of a waterfall that we saw on the way to Yellowstone. I love it. Smiles, Dane Ann

Sami Al-Khalili

November 14, 2009 at 4:46 AM

Reminds me of a Trance song, that song moves me to another place, another world. And that world, is exactly what you have written now. Tranquility, peace.. i'm home. Love, Sami.

P Sheart

October 26, 2009 at 12:27 PM

Hi Laura, Amazing visual! So much said in three lines. Gets me all dreamy eyed as I sit and ponder upon your wonderful Haiku,smile. Thanks for sharing. Smile. Have a inspiring week! Love Light Truth Patricia