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Whispers In the Waterfall

Misty morning blue Glorious wet teardrops fall Upon the rocks

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/29/2009 7:09:00 PM

nicely penned, interesting poem, keep sharing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/29/2009 2:23:00 PM

Laura, This is a beautiful haiku. It reminds me of a waterfall that we saw on the way to Yellowstone. I love it. Smiles, Dane Ann

Sammy Shaq

Date: 11/14/2009 4:46:00 AM

Reminds me of a Trance song, that song moves me to another place, another world. And that world, is exactly what you have written now. Tranquility, peace.. i'm home. Love, Sami.

P Sheart

Date: 10/26/2009 12:27:00 PM

Hi Laura, Amazing visual! So much said in three lines. Gets me all dreamy eyed as I sit and ponder upon your wonderful Haiku,smile. Thanks for sharing. Smile. Have a inspiring week! Love Light Truth Patricia

Date: 10/9/2009 2:33:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Good luck in the contest. Enjoyed reading your poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2009 2:12:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara