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In whispers soft, the rustling leaves confide, Secrets shared upon the forest floor, Their gentle murmurs in the breeze abide, As tales of ages past are whispered more. Beside the brook, its babbling waters sing, A lullaby that soothes the weary soul, In murmured tones, the stream's sweet whispers bring, A sense of peace, where troubled hearts console. Above, the birds in chorus chirp and trill, Their melodies a symphony of air, Their whispered songs the valleys gently fill, With notes that echo through the woodland fair. Amidst the field where wildflowers dance and sway, Their whispers weave a tapestry of spring, Each bloom a voice in nature's grand display, In whispered hues, life's beauty takes its wing.

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Date: 4/11/2024 6:01:00 AM
What a melodic refreshing poem full of beautiful imagery!
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Date: 4/10/2024 5:42:00 AM
Lovely tone and flow, Jay. Much enjoyed the imagery.
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Date: 4/9/2024 4:31:00 PM
your words and images painted a beautiful masterpiece. I was left breathless for it contained flowing rhyme, effective alliteration, and personification (to name a few) I especially liked these lines: Beside the brook, its babbling waters sing, A lullaby that soothes the weary soul, Pat yourself on the back and give yourself a round of applause!...and enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 4/9/2024 12:49:00 PM
a gorgeous landscape and scene painted with words, Jay
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Date: 4/9/2024 12:26:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Jay - Best wishes in the contest ... in my ears and eyes it has already won :) - hugs
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