Whispers and Promises

Promises and words of love      Naked bodies on strange beds      Down filled 
pillows      Piled up to lie their heads      Television shouting out it`s static      Dripping 
water in the next room      Plastic flowers      That will never bloom      Mirrors full of 
past images      Gideon in the bedside table      Whispering secrets      And promises 
of      More and more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/21/2015 5:16:00 PM
Richard:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:09:00 AM
congrats on the win, richard
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Date: 9/5/2014 10:15:00 PM
Richard :) Congratulations, on your awesome win. Many, many thanks for supporting my contest. Stop by and enjoy my newest blog, "Thoughts." if you'd like. Good night, LUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2014 5:39:00 AM
nice to hear from you....Rick
Date: 2/20/2013 1:56:00 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Richard, sorry i am a bit late xx
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:33:00 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:35:00 PM
I really like this one and the matter of fact way that you "displayed" the contents of a hotel room. Very cool. congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
Richard, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:38:00 PM
Nice work, Richard! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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