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Whispers and Promises

Promises and words of love Naked bodies on strange beds Down filled pillows Piled up to lie their heads Television shouting out it`s static Dripping water in the next room Plastic flowers That will never bloom Mirrors full of past images Gideon in the bedside table Whispering secrets And promises of More and more

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/21/2015 5:16:00 PM
Richard:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:09:00 AM
congrats on the win, richard
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Date: 9/5/2014 10:15:00 PM
Richard :) Congratulations, on your awesome win. Many, many thanks for supporting my contest. Stop by and enjoy my newest blog, "Thoughts." if you'd like. Good night, LUV ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2014 5:39:00 AM
nice to hear from you....Rick
Date: 2/20/2013 1:56:00 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Richard, sorry i am a bit late xx
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:33:00 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2013 8:35:00 PM
I really like this one and the matter of fact way that you "displayed" the contents of a hotel room. Very cool. congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:14:00 PM
Richard, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:38:00 PM
Nice work, Richard! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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