Whispers and Promises

Promises and words of love      Naked bodies on strange beds      Down filled 
pillows      Piled up to lie their heads      Television shouting out it`s static      Dripping 
water in the next room      Plastic flowers      That will never bloom      Mirrors full of 
past images      Gideon in the bedside table      Whispering secrets      And promises 
of      More and more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Richard:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
Mehta Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 10:09 AM
congrats on the win, richard
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September 5, 2014 at 10:15 PM
Richard :) Congratulations, on your awesome win. Many, many thanks for supporting my contest. Stop by and enjoy my newest blog, "Thoughts." if you'd like. Good night, LUV ~LINDA~
Ferry Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 5:39 AM
nice to hear from you....Rick
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 1:56 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Richard, sorry i am a bit late xx
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 1:33 AM
Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 8:35 PM
I really like this one and the matter of fact way that you "displayed" the contents of a hotel room. Very cool. congrats on your win.
Johnson Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
A   Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Richard, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD
Merryman Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:38 PM
Nice work, Richard! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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