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Whispers

Warm
Breath
Covers
Milky skin
Warming me inside
Suffusing my body with joy.
Every cell reaches toward you and shivers in glee.
Anticipation knows no bounds as you whisper across my skin and desire ignites.

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Tim Smith Date: 4/19/2015 7:46:00 PM Lovely Fibonacci Jan...you made it seem effortless...Ive done one in the past Tim Login to Reply Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/19/2015 11:06:00 PM Thanks..I'm a math teacher so my brain likes working with numbers so se ryu tanka choka are forms I like..I also like the sweep of the fibonacci. But I must confess, this is after an edit or two...wrote it before my morning cofee so some lines had to be changed. Only second attempt so I'll probably try a few more.

Thomas Martin Date: 4/19/2015 12:17:00 PM Lovely!! very romantic! Login to Reply Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/19/2015 1:55:00 PM Thank you Thomas.

Emile Pinet Date: 4/19/2015 9:03:00 AM This is very good with superb imagery and emotions grab you from the start and never lets go. Emile. Login to Reply Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/19/2015 9:27:00 AM Thanks Emile, I'm still playing with the form but like this better than the last fib.

Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2015 8:22:00 AM ohhh err Janet a sultry sensual write - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/19/2015 9:28:00 AM Your. Reply went to Bev Jan Allison Date: 4/19/2015 8:30:00 AM Janet you would be surprised what does get posted on here! hugs jan xx Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/19/2015 8:29:00 AM What? It was only my hand ;-) ..Lol. I have many that do not get posted to this site because of the guidlines but did not think this one was too much.