Whispers

Warm
Breath
Covers
Milky skin
Warming me inside
Suffusing my body with joy.
Every cell reaches toward you and shivers in glee.
Anticipation knows no bounds as you whisper across my skin and desire ignites.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 7:46 PM
Lovely Fibonacci Jan...you made it seem effortless...Ive done one in the past Tim
Cervenka Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Thanks..I'm a math teacher so my brain likes working with numbers so se ryu tanka choka are forms I like..I also like the sweep of the fibonacci. But I must confess, this is after an edit or two...wrote it before my morning cofee so some lines had to be changed. Only second attempt so I'll probably try a few more.
Martin Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Lovely!! very romantic!
Cervenka Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Thomas.
Pinet Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 9:03 AM
This is very good with superb imagery and emotions grab you from the start and never lets go. Emile.
Cervenka Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Emile, I'm still playing with the form but like this better than the last fib.
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:22 AM
ohhh err Janet a sultry sensual write - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Your. Reply went to Bev
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Janet you would be surprised what does get posted on here! hugs jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 8:29 AM
What? It was only my hand ;-) ..Lol. I have many that do not get posted to this site because of the guidlines but did not think this one was too much.
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