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Whispers

Warm
Breath
Covers
Milky skin
Warming me inside
Suffusing my body with joy.
Every cell reaches toward you and shivers in glee.
Anticipation knows no bounds as you whisper across my skin and desire ignites.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/19/2015 7:46:00 PM
Lovely Fibonacci Jan...you made it seem effortless...Ive done one in the past Tim
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thanks..I'm a math teacher so my brain likes working with numbers so se ryu tanka choka are forms I like..I also like the sweep of the fibonacci. But I must confess, this is after an edit or two...wrote it before my morning cofee so some lines had to be changed. Only second attempt so I'll probably try a few more.
Date: 4/19/2015 12:17:00 PM
Lovely!! very romantic!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 1:55:00 PM
Thank you Thomas.
Date: 4/19/2015 9:03:00 AM
This is very good with superb imagery and emotions grab you from the start and never lets go. Emile.
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Emile, I'm still playing with the form but like this better than the last fib.
Date: 4/19/2015 8:47:00 AM
Oh those whispers ... Agree with Jan . Sweet and sensual perfect combination Janet .7 Bev :)
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Bev Smith
Date: 4/19/2015 9:30:00 AM
If this comment was for me Janet , I don't work in a school ... but am curious as to which site you refer to . Soup mail me if ya like .... Bev :)
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 9:25:00 AM
I know you work in a school...I am a teacher alsoat high school level. The other site is more secure should the Google me.
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Bev! I try not to post anything too overt here.
Date: 4/19/2015 8:22:00 AM
ohhh err Janet a sultry sensual write - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 9:28:00 AM
Your. Reply went to Bev
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/19/2015 8:30:00 AM
Janet you would be surprised what does get posted on here! hugs jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/19/2015 8:29:00 AM
What? It was only my hand ;-) ..Lol. I have many that do not get posted to this site because of the guidlines but did not think this one was too much.