Whispers

I once heard a saying,
that the happiest people are the saddest
Shining because they’ve seen the darkest
Like the lotus that grows out of mud
Or the rotting stump that bears a bud..

You never know what troubles the mind
So be careful with words unkind
The glowing person just beside you
Could be a crumbling ruin behind the hairdo
 Most people struggle everyday
Souls burdened with decay..

I guess it takes a lot of courage
To act normal with that damage
Hard to believe that under the surface
Lives a soul with no purpose
A cry for help won’t be any crisper
Listen to the their inner whisper..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dillon Avatar
June 12, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Another fantastic write, I like your style and you write in just the way I do... sort of... ;) You should take a look at allpoetry.com if you arnt on there already, its an awesome site.... look me up there.. soul to die...
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 7:49 AM
Love the emotions in your writes Jones..this message is so true..love the way you penned it!!
Britt Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 7:19 PM
this one's in my fav's as well
Britt Avatar
June 2, 2012 at 7:10 PM
this is HOTT! yet so true! so strong these ppl seem to me just trying to get by Keep It Up <3
Jones Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 8:52 AM
Thank you again!!
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