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WHISPERS

A.W. Nutter Can you hear the whispers Follow us into the darkness Sanctuary is found in the night Let us feast upon your innocence Step away from the power of light The shadows are calling Exercise your freewill by defiance Hearken to the voices whispering Let us frolic in your disobedience Darkest desires, yours for the asking Let your spirit run free Why spend your life in servitude Remove your halo of perfection Let us change your archaic attitude The spirit yearns for abdication With the demons of lust Sinful pleasures caressing your palate As we enlighten your virgin spirit To the reality of your souls new fate A new kingdom yours to inherit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/4/2010 12:15:00 PM
sounds like a campaign slogan for the volunteer vampires of the underworld
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Date: 7/2/2010 12:14:00 AM
Get thee behind.....very well portrayed Anthony.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 9:18:00 AM
well done! AW! jimbo
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Date: 6/16/2010 3:15:00 AM
Oh i just love this ...seductive and innocent at the same time sarah thank you for commenting on my poem ,please read more of them see what you think ,my dream is to write a passionate poetry book ... bless sarah x
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Date: 6/14/2010 8:45:00 PM
this is very interesting...... and i thank you for your encouraging comment on my unfinished song, helps me grow cheers oscar
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:32:00 PM
This is a remarkable poem. I enjoyed the flow and the message.
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Date: 6/13/2010 6:04:00 AM
TY for the comment I am smiling too- This poem speaks- I hope I am not too far off here- all I can think of is the mark of the beast!
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:57:00 AM
bet this would make a great song too also this would be great to tell around a campfire loved the imagery and play on words thansk also for your kind comment too keep up the great writing
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:26:00 PM
Truly a beautifully written poem, Anthony. Couldn't help but think of the song "The Music of the Night" from Phantom of the Opera while reading it. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2010 2:29:00 PM
Anthony this is fabulous and such meaningful words to treasure... luv the breaks in between the verses with the one line statements.. awesome my friend... u should enter in one of the contests. ... for sure... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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