Whispers

The moon in her fullest florescence
Drifting through the thicket 
Hooked in the branches 
Whispered secrets to the tree
Shied leaves bent down their heads
And the naughty wind carried away the giggles.




PLACE : 2nd

In Bloom Poetry Contest
Personification poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Joseph May 
Date: 01-03-2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Patri, congratulations on your win with this vividly expressive poem of lovely images. Sending you blessings of serene moonlight!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Thanks a lot for the best compliments!
May Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:41 PM
Congrats on your win Patri, Very nicely done
Venkata Ramana Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 2:26 AM
Thank you so much for the best compliments!
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