Whispers

Guilt was a thorny carpet
Laid on the ground I walked on.
Repent and redeem,
No vile soul feels a disesteem.
Whispers filling my head,
Too loud to ignore,
Pills upon pills I swallowed them all,
For a brief stolen moment,
I dove into an ocean of a blissfully quiet oblivion.
A hollow elm,
A wingless butterfly,
A shadow of what was once I.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Deep and poignant. Well penned, Khadidja.
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November 1, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Potent, excellent poem.
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