Whisperings of the Creek

His nearness, I, seek. Eyelids brush against my cheek. Sounds of a Spring Creek. 2/7/2021 ~ 2 ~ Rhymed Senryu

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/8/2021 9:35:00 PM

I see, and remember and smile.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/9/2021 2:40:00 PM

Its funny, Caren! I can see you smiling ear to ear! I honestly feel, I know you. Pangie))

Judy Ball

Date: 2/7/2021 6:01:00 PM

Nice. Brings visions of two lovers meeting at their special place. Well done. God Bless, JB

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/7/2021 6:19:00 PM

Hello Judy! Thank you...exactly as you said. This is quite real to me. I love writing powerful verse in a few lines. It's not always possible to do, however fir me, at least. Nice to see you again, Blessings be yours, Panagiota

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/7/2021 11:03:00 AM

A lovely image with a romantic location. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/7/2021 11:47:00 AM

I can hear the creek, feel the eyelashes, his nearness. Yes, great location Pangie