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Whisperings

Why do you both fall silent when I enter the room?
Hannah is my oldest and very best friend!
I know you ‘ve been seeing her behind my back
So please stop treating me like a fool
People keep giving me little smiles
Even my parents are acting strangely
Right now I want to pack my bags and leave
I can’t stand your deception any longer
Neil, I need you to tell me the truth NOW ...
Good grief! How did you keep THAT a secret
So ...  we’re getting married in the morning!

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2023

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Bj Legros Kelley Date: 8/18/2023 3:43:00 PM Wow!! Surprise! What a fun acrostic Jan! Congratulations!! Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/16/2023 1:32:00 PM Loved this acrostic Jan, nice twist at the end. Looks like congrats are in order. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2023 12:06:00 PM - Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Jan :) - hugs Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/16/2023 10:55:00 AM Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write again. Have a blessed/great day............. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 8/16/2023 7:33:00 AM Great acrostic, indeed. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 8/16/2023 6:02:00 AM Jan, your imagery is consistently exceptional. Your writing is impressively crafted, my friend. Congratulations on your outstanding Win. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/16/2023 2:10:00 AM Great twist, Jan, congratulations:) Login to Reply

Brian Sambourne Date: 8/15/2023 8:59:00 PM What a smackaroo of an ending! Loved it! Creativity aplenty here. Be well. Brian Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/15/2023 3:22:00 AM - aha ... surprise :))) - Lovely written, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 8/15/2023 3:03:00 AM Love the twist, also. SO adorable. She sounds like me! God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/15/2023 12:28:00 AM Love the twist at the end Jan. Tom Login to Reply

Akkina Downing Date: 8/14/2023 7:32:00 PM Gotcha baby! Lol. Fabulous one, Jan :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/14/2023 2:00:00 PM A creative/fun ~ write/picture. A fun ending. "Good Luck" Have a great day............. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 8/14/2023 1:12:00 PM Your acrostic is truly delightful, Jan. I am always pleased by your choice of words. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 8/14/2023 1:08:00 PM I was glad to see that twist at the end, Jan! Nicely done… Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/14/2023 12:44:00 PM I like the irony in the last line, Very nicely penned Jan Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2023 1:05:00 PM I couldn't resist a little twist Joseph! hugs Jan xx