Whispering Wings


      Amethyst shades dazzle her mysteriousness
        hiding black secrets in vulnerable mellows
          though recognized in the forgotten marshes
             she's said to possess dark onyx powers.
             She smiles at lost passersby in the red valley
           aware of the myths bubbling beneath wet soil
         and they disappear in unexplored forests
        seemingly safer than her uncharted evil mind
       every full moon augments her fragrance they say
     her Carmen blooms to entrap innocent souls.

      A thousand false alarms wrapped in assumptions
        for they'd never know she's a trampled magnolia
       tattered spirits in frayed rags was all she had
            dried oceans of scarlet tears in enclaves of fears
       humanity died on a full moon night under heavy breaths
          her weakened screams muted with lustful arms
              blurred visions of a forced conviction in blood
           her faint shrieks died in this swamp of tragedies
        till her blood froze beneath slumbering snow.

    Her burning spirit simmered mauve mists
      slimy seeds sprouted the dirty green marshes
        spring bloomed her courage to recollect storms
           crushed to sprinkle colors on heavenly topanga
      diamonds in her mind shimmer as she laughs 
         sending ripples of valor in perturbed oceans
           embracing her flaws she sings a folk melody
             trances of whispers blended in mellow symphony
    legends of crimson valley float with her flute
       a goddess calming oppressed souls to breathe 
         they've heard stories of sapphires burning
           splashing colors of freedom and kindness
    but all they see on drooping moonless nights
       her pious caricature coming alive in dark
          magenta petals blooming in layered fog of storms
            turning mauve then scarlet glittering ruby
         spreading wings from green marshes perfumed flowers
       on elevators of courage to save scarred souls
    infant butterflies arise in lilac hues of whispering hopes.


July 4, 2020

A Contest About a Goddess or God - Not THE God Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
~Winner: 1st Place

butter flies and marshes mellow Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann
~Premiere Contest Winner: 2nd Place
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Chiri Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 5:05 PM
Amazing piece! Congrats on your win!;)
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:30 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Brenda :) Much love!
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July 25, 2020 at 3:11 PM
I always admired your formats, Aditi, I failed to mentioned that beyond your mesmerizing poems my friend, and my compliments for your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@William
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:29 AM
I am glad you love my work William. It means a lot coming from a talented poet like you :) Thank you for your appreciation :)
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July 25, 2020 at 2:20 PM
Yay, a nice win too. Back to say congrats on this poem doing it again. xoxo
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:28 AM
Thank you for another visit to appreciate my muse Jeanne. Much love :)
Kauffman Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 10:52 AM
Wonderful use of color, Aditi. This flows with poetic grace. Congratulations on your first place win. Blessings!
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:28 AM
I am glad you love my muse Sam. Thank you for your appreciation. Much love :)
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 4:51 PM
your imagery is so vivid aditi, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:27 AM
Glad you loved it Jan. Thank you for your kind appreciation :)
Chiri Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 4:46 PM
This was an amazing read! Congrats on your 2nd place win!;)
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:26 AM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Well done my friend--stunning write, as always. BIG congrats on your podium win. You certainly deserve the accolades, Aditi.
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:26 AM
Thank you for visiting and appreciating my words with your kind wishes dear friend. Your uplifting comments always encourage me :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Lovely imagery! Congratulations, Aditi!
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Thank you for appreciating Kim! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write your pen did. Enjoy your win and day with blessings.............
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words as always Paula. Your uplifting appreciation makes me glad. Much love :)
Mcgee Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 7:35 AM
Your story telling poem is a beauty. congrats Aditi.
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:24 AM
I am glad you love it Jeanne. Thank you for your appreciation :)
Neumann Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 4:42 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations my friend. Kind wishes, Kai
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation and for my placement in your contest Kai. Blessings :)
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 12:27 PM
I echo Victor's praise below. The words seem to flow from your gifted pen... I imagine that this beauty will continue your run of #1 wins, all richly deserved. Warmest wishes, Gershon
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:30 AM
Thank you for your kind words and wishes Gershon. Honored by your visit and encouragement. God bless you :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 9:42 AM
Aditi, your beautiful, vividly descriptive poem conveys a powerful message about how both good and evil can be wrapped in beauty. Janice
Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 3:58 PM
I am glad you loved the message of my poem Janice. Thanks for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings :)
Somadas Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Your wonderful imagination expressed in elegant letters is a pleasure to read.. As usual, you mesmerized the reader's heart..Good luck..
Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 1:56 AM
I am glad my words seemed mesmerizing to you Jenish. Thank you for your appreciation and visit. God bless you :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 4, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Wow, this is another stunner, Aditi:-) I very rarely do this, but congratulations on your win in advance!
Mishra Avatar
July 5, 2020 at 1:55 AM
I am really grateful for such generous words Edward. Honored by your wishes. Blessings :)
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