Whispering Winds

Fierce winds whispering Through bare branches shivering Twirling snow drifts mount

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Margaret Foster

Date: 2/12/2010 8:10:00 PM

A clear image of winds whipping up the snow into drifts. I can feel the chill. well done. thank you Audrey for your kind comments on my poem today....Margaret

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/12/2010 1:32:00 PM

pretty poem, thankss for your comments today on my corny joke.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/12/2010 12:01:00 PM

Sounds very cold and like hot chocolate weather. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/12/2010 10:11:00 AM

Hi Audrey, Winter has been quite snowy and stormy this year. I think your haiku succinctly sums it up...I can see the drifts! (Have you tried an "End Line Word" poem, yet? See soup mail.)

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 6:58:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku. Lots of wind and snow this Winter. Thanks for sharing.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2010 7:35:00 PM

OK get ready.. part 2 of Mac's contest is posted to enter now.. so go get 'em with those "beauties" u create... luv. and sympathy for snowbound living .. yuck! .. appreciate your gracious comments tonight.. my friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie.