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I came across an old cemetery today while exploring, full of broken, toppled headstones and tangled weeds; there was a deep hush, a whisper and a sigh, I felt tears, my tears were falling for long dead souls forgotten. A tree's roots are entwined around an old, tilted stone, in loving memory of my husband George, born Feb, 1882; oh, George you were loved very much once upon a time, God took him, but he will not be forgotten, engraved. And I am of the age of Aquarius too, just like you, I love violets and everything purple, and I am so mellow; George were you a deep thinker, sensitive, creative, I get hurt easily and I always want to help people. Be at peace George in your decay and ravaged grave, listen to the twittering of birds this bright sunny day; promise, promise, I will be back to lay some purple violets, forever now, dear soul, you will dwell in my heart . . . Now, be still George, I heard your whisper . . . ____________________________ April 28, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Whispering Promise Copyright Protected, ID 16-127-223-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Strand Select W sponsor, Brian Strand Honorable Mention

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Date: 2/21/2020 4:10:00 PM
Such a lovely reflection on your journey in the journey of another soul. Pensive, melancholy yet full of promise to always remember George and leave flowers - sweet violets. By the way - January/February child, Happy Birthday. These too need to be remembered!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2020 6:37:00 PM
Sam, thanks for visiting with the lovely and the comment _Constance
Date: 2/21/2020 9:58:00 AM
Dear Heart, I love the whisper in this poem's prayer. I love the journey it depicted. The roots will bind us all one day.,fresh eyes will be left to wonder who we were. -Richard
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Date: 2/22/2020 6:38:00 PM
Richard, thanks for visiting with the love and beautiful comment _Constance
Date: 2/21/2020 3:07:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this.... making me miss my Mom whose death anniversary is nigh. Thanks likewise for my placement in your previously judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 2/22/2020 6:38:00 PM
Beata, thanks for visiting and the comment _Constance

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