Whispering Death

Gabrielle hasn't smiled for eternity
as a torture victom i know how he feels
he tells me there are war heros sitting on death row
judges more criminal than we know
he asked the lord to come make love to him
through me as i understand it
not a very happy holiday he's on

He told me of the way we hang our sins on jesus
a subconcious routine of our souls to smote an unheavenly enemy
the biblical code collected in three different books
the curse to break the aftermath of the enemies curse

Told me things happen for a reason
on a protest for god to take a turn
punished for doing gods work he says
maybe god should try doing his own job

psychology of belief systems all in place for this rapture
taking place and misunderstood
As confused as i am in the midst of his game to get me laid
i have pretty much lost all will to live

he says him and mankind are in the same business
here to learn the difference of good and bad
I'm praying for it to be over
than he informs me
don't be surprised if you wake up to hear about a dead judge
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 7:30 AM
A wonderful write. I enjoyed it
Del Fierro Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 12:11 PM
and what if the dead judge is yourself,only to awaken to a world of understanding instead of all the nonsense questions?....strange world of riddles we exist in.....peace , jay
Kendrick Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 11:53 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
A   Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 11:46 AM
wow, cool write , enjoyed...p.d.
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