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Whispering and Weeping

William was whispering and weeping sad words echoing, It was my turn answering calls at a kids call in this evening; And I was listening to William as my heart was just breaking, He had only been living eight years and he was really suffering. William was whispering and weeping sad words echoing, He told me crying that mean words were like whips lashing; His parents said he was worthless, freaking stupid, not worth living, And he was whispering to me that for awhile his arms he was cutting. William was whispering and weeping sad words echoing, He told me that he was thinking to end all the pain by hanging; In panic, I tried to keep him talking while the police I was calling, Then, the phone went dead and I was left blinking, my soul chilling. The police called, telling me, William was safe, now I was weeping. ______________________________ April 7, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/Alliteration/Internal Rhyme/Whispering and Weeping Copyright Protected, ID 16-775-629-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, It Shouldn't Hurt To Be A Child sponsor, Becca Teagan Honorable Mention
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April 14, 2016 at 10:23 PM
Broken Wings,, congratulations on the honorable mention of your poem. Linda
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April 15, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats ~
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April 14, 2016 at 7:54 AM
A very moving write Constance. Congrats on being chosen.
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April 14, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Richard than you for the compliment and the congrats !
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April 13, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement...I am so enthralled with this poem! A perfect gem...:)-luloo
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April 14, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !!
Austin Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 2:20 PM
My wife worked at Head Start once upon a time and saw many Williams. Fine awakening lines. Love, daver
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April 11, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Dave, thanks for visiting and the love !!
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April 7, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Now I am happy too.. Beautifully done.
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April 8, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Pashang, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
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April 7, 2016 at 2:20 PM
- Heartbreaking poem, B.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 7, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Nance Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 12:39 PM
Oh that brought tears to my eyes :( hugs
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April 7, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Casarah, thanks for the comment, appreciate !
Smith Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 11:12 AM
So sad Constance...my heart breaks every time I hear about harm coming to a child even just words can be painful.
La France Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Tim, thanks for visiting, verbal abuse can be just as painful as the physical ~
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