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William was whispering and weeping sad words echoing, It was my turn answering calls at a kids call in this evening; And I was listening to William as my heart was just breaking, He had only been living eight years and he was really suffering. William was whispering and weeping sad words echoing, He told me crying that mean words were like whips lashing; His parents said he was worthless, freaking stupid, not worth living, And he was whispering to me that for awhile his arms he was cutting. William was whispering and weeping sad words echoing, He told me that he was thinking to end all the pain by hanging; In panic, I tried to keep him talking while the police I was calling, Then, the phone went dead and I was left blinking, my soul chilling. The police called, telling me, William was safe, now I was weeping. ______________________________ April 7, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/Alliteration/Internal Rhyme/Whispering and Weeping Copyright Protected, ID 16-775-629-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, It Shouldn't Hurt To Be A Child sponsor, Becca Teagan Honorable Mention

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Date: 4/14/2016 10:23:00 PM
Broken Wings,, congratulations on the honorable mention of your poem. Linda
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:47:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 4/14/2016 7:54:00 AM
A very moving write Constance. Congrats on being chosen.
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Date: 4/14/2016 3:45:00 PM
Richard than you for the compliment and the congrats !
Date: 4/13/2016 8:59:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement...I am so enthralled with this poem! A perfect gem...:)-luloo
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Date: 4/14/2016 3:46:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !!
Date: 4/11/2016 2:20:00 PM
My wife worked at Head Start once upon a time and saw many Williams. Fine awakening lines. Love, daver
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Date: 4/11/2016 3:19:00 PM
Dave, thanks for visiting and the love !!
Date: 4/7/2016 11:59:00 PM
Now I am happy too.. Beautifully done.
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:23:00 AM
Pashang, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Date: 4/7/2016 2:20:00 PM
- Heartbreaking poem, B.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/7/2016 5:07:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate !
Date: 4/7/2016 12:39:00 PM
Oh that brought tears to my eyes :( hugs
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Date: 4/7/2016 5:07:00 PM
Casarah, thanks for the comment, appreciate !
Date: 4/7/2016 11:12:00 AM
So sad Constance...my heart breaks every time I hear about harm coming to a child even just words can be painful.
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Date: 4/7/2016 5:08:00 PM
Tim, thanks for visiting, verbal abuse can be just as painful as the physical ~

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