Whispering

whispering
When the evening came
it whispered to me: 
If I bring him into my heart
Or closer still
If I live in his soul
Or He lives in mine
Or Love lives in us
And we drown in it 

Whenever he came
I whispered to the night
Oh night wait--
there is no sky for me 
If mine eyes haven't seen thine eyes
all I know now is that life returned to me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:13 AM
Congrats on the win, Fatima
Nusairat Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Thank you Dr.Ram same to you :)
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December 9, 2013 at 5:41 PM
Hi Fatima, i miss stopping by and reading your poems. , Thanks for understanding and having patience with me. I'm sending hugs from the bottom of my heart. I am very sorry I kept all my winning poems on standby. LOL, Had a MAD headache. wink! wink! .... Congratulations.... If you have time, please enjoy my Hot & Cute blog.. Called. "Fire Sister." take care and enjoy this win -- xox.LINDA
Nusairat Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 6:37 PM
Hi Dear Linda I miss seeing you around. hope you will be alright.Thank you so much for your kindness and your sweet words. Love and Kisses
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:46 AM
- Let the light shine for each other - a beautiful love poem Fatima. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 21, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Thank you dear Anne.I am so happy that you like it <3
Mehta Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Lovely expressions of love, Fatima
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November 21, 2013 at 6:17 PM
Thank you Dr.Ram..appreciated
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November 16, 2013 at 4:56 PM
† This Is Very Beautiful! 'Whispering;' I Love That Tis, So Soft As Gentle ˜ Love John
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November 16, 2013 at 5:00 PM
Thank you Johnny.Appreciated
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