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Whispered Dreams in the Sky

Written: April 29, 2025, for Contest by Brian Strand ************************** diaphanous spirals of spectral nebula tethered to whispers of life a paradox swirls in meticulous orchestration of touch & sight where heartbeat echoes foreboding forecasting a sweeping chronicle etched in ether fragile breath fleeting as twilight thread unbares layers of ethereal embroidery sewn from souvenirs tactile puzzles mapping connections under vast sky scattered with ambiguity of perception seeking clarity in clouds marked by light & experience wind-driven sails mysteries folded within gentle breeze amidst ephemeral odyssey intimacy anchors us with its quiet song OPEN FORM created by Brian Strand in lowercase without grammatical symbols, uses spaces&breaks relying upon 'the one breath limitation' & as a 'happening' requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input &respond in a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood & thus is inherently variable.

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Date: 4/30/2025 5:34:00 AM
Hey this is cool and different. I'm going to describe it as "ordered chaos." Nice string of words
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