Whisper Sweet Nothings

Nothing is like riding this tornado,
wild and twisting, away that we go.
Oh, it is so magical, this adventure,
whipping around, an enchanted blur,
we are more than a mere whisper.

Sensations are the fireworks scream,
wide awake, blasting off into this dream,
this is crazy, this is that in love feeling,
heart racing while kiss stealing,
Super glue sealing, broken heart healing.

This is sweet like cinnamon and honey.
Trip and fall on funny bone funny,
yeah this is what happiness brings,
the sound that only a cuckoo bird sings,
love is more that whispered sweet nothings.

Nothing is like this wild ride,
nothing is like this full blown fire inside.



For contest: Whisper Sweet Nothings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 11:19 AM
This transmits such a happy, highflying feeling, Casarah! Love in full bloom...euphoria! Love the rhyme scheme, too. ~ Warm regards // paul
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:38 PM
Wonderful imagery , Casarah:) hugs Eve
Parmale Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 1:43 AM
Masterpiece...Casrah
Yvonne Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 10:34 AM
This one is above and beyond. One of my faves and in fact also a fav.
Barden Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:37 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Casarah - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Gauthier Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:35 PM
Congrats, Casarah. Well done.
Hamilton Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Beautiful write Cas, glad to have you back, congrats on a nice placement!
May Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Congrats on your win Casarah
Lamoureux Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 4:00 PM
If I whisper sweet nothings how will you be able to hear me??? Great poem Casarah, I enjoyed the funness of this piece! Hugs Rick.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Wow did this poem blast off with the euphoric emotions of being in love! An awesome write Casarah! S h e ' s b a c k! I loved it! This has winner written all over it! A Fave! : )
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 5:17 PM
I shall whisper, glad to see you back here!!!! great write, hugs!
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 4:55 PM
I got a warm glow inside reading your beautiful rhyme Cas and its so lovely to see you back on soup again:-) Hope all is good with you Abbie and Tom:-) hugs Jan xx
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