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Whisper Sweet Nothings'

In the cold and dark night
A knock on the wood door
Ended the quiet silence
Baffling the cottage resident

A smudged white paper
Laid on the old red rug
Telling the dreaded words
Nobody want to hear in life

Lillie opened the wrinkled paper
Reading the words were written
With tears running down the cheeks
Wishing it was a bad dream

Time passed healing the scars 
Preparing the heart to love again
When the right gentleman appears
Leaving disenchantment in the past

In a rainy afternoon, love bloomed
Appearing a stranger in the yard
Asking Lillie for a business address
Surging suddenly love at first sight

For Whisper Sweet Nothings'
Sponsored by Julie Rodeheaver
November 13, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/23/2017 2:34:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Nayda - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/23/2017 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Gregory.
Date: 11/19/2017 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nayda. Well done.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/19/2017 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Line.
Date: 11/14/2017 3:20:00 PM
Lovely story telling... well written.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/19/2017 10:46:00 PM
Thank you SO.
Date: 11/14/2017 10:06:00 AM
Dear Nadya: I like this poem. Leon
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/14/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Leon.
Date: 11/13/2017 5:13:00 PM
I'm so glad the story had a happy ending Nayda:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 11/14/2017 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Jan.

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