Whisper Song

whisper away
from what I feel today
tommorrow brings nothingness
an empty haven of silence
break in with white noise
come to find
I have a voice
my light is a new
exit
exit 
to more emptyness yet?
comfort for needs
I already have
brought down
capture
in 
and out
that sound of love
that rings out 
here
here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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October 20, 2008 at 11:40 AM
Very beautiful, poignant. "My light is a new exit to more emptiness yet..." Darkness is emptiness, because it is complete lack--complete lack of light. Light is a different kind of emptiness....an emptiness of letting go of what is weightful and painful to simply just be. Being is who we are. Best wishes, Sara:)
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