Notes About The Poem
"While I dance I cannot judge, I cannot hate, I cannot separate myself from life. I can only be joyful & whole. This is why I dance." - Hans Bos

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A Sam Scott poem:
11th September 2023
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Whisper - ::Published::

I hear the whisper now
As quiet as the grass in the gentle breeze
Soothing and lulling
Inviting me forward with an extended hand
To dance barefoot
Despite the cloudy sky and threat of showers
Under the thinning canopy of the trees
Yet, not despite the rain 
Invited because of it
To cleanse and wash away
Life's dust and debris
Returning to the freshness of innocence
The uncluttered traveller
Resting a while
Reconnecting with the ancient clay
Luscious pastures
Silent stones
To nurture, nourish and
Restore
The soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 9:03 PM
Many congratulations dear Sam! This beautiful poem will be a great addition to the anthology. I’m so glad to have the opportunity to read it again and appreciate the depth, the serenity “soothing and lulling” found within its so poetically well written lines. Well done! :):) x
Scott Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 11:44 PM
Thank you! Good to see you back on here. Blessings, Sx
Bowring Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 3:14 PM
Love this so well written poem Sam.’Returning to the freshness of innocence’ ‘ reconnecting with the ancient clay’- great lines. Great imagery. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Scott Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 8:48 PM
Looks like I made it into the new anthology, Christina! Sx
Scott Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 8:35 PM
Christina, you have blessed my heart with such welcome and generous comments :))
Meadows Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 12:06 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Scott Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 12:08 AM
Why thank you Daisy :)
Empress Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Oh my im a huge fan of paulo coelho. I have all his books, my fave is “ the winner stands alone” and “ veronica decides to die” and now about your poem i truly love how you’ve written this especially the line “ quiet as the grass “ “silent stones” unique! Love it
Scott Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 8:46 PM
Just reading The Alchemist and loving it x
Scott Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 6:24 AM
I first found him on Twitter (or whichever letter of the alphabet it is this week).. just so quotable. You name some books I haven't read yet but so great to have that common interest! Thank you too for more lovely and generous comments :)
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