Whisper On a Breeze

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A whisper on a breeze in the midst of a dream ~ a kiss before I go... Leaving you to bathe in the sun’s rays and the glory of a New day, wrapped in Love forever Strong and True. I am always with you ~ For we have been Blessed.

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John Hamilton

Date: 9/10/2019 12:58:00 PM

Well done HT, reminds me of Chris Green, believe me that's a huge compliment!

Hello There
Date: 9/10/2019 3:28:00 PM

From what I have gathered thus far about Chris' writing, I will take that as a tremendous (however undeserving...;) compliment! Thank you, John!!

Chris Green

Date: 9/9/2019 7:23:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, like a cool breeze on a hot day, your poem wrapped itself around me in a comforting fashion. Loved this one.

Hello There
Date: 9/9/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thank you, Chris ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2019 12:14:00 PM

- A lovely poem :) - Hello There ... I feel "know" your poems ... who are you? - // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There
Date: 9/8/2019 10:22:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :) I have only shared my writing in one place ~ a very small section of a larger and poorly monitored site. Maybe you know me from there?

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/6/2019 9:59:00 PM

A truly tender poem dear poet

Hello There
Date: 9/7/2019 12:10:00 PM

Thank you, Frederic, for stopping by. A piece of verse for those who have lost a loved one ~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/6/2019 9:46:00 PM

Blessed indeed. Thanks for reading and commenting on my Broken People Poem.

Hello There
Date: 9/7/2019 12:12:00 PM

My pleasure, truly.