Whisper My Name

Please whisper my name,
Are you waiting at my door??
Whispering, where are you my love once more?
My heart beating so that the whole world could hear,
Anticipating and longing for your touch so near:
Your hand comes through the door reaching for me..
I open the door wanting and longing for your kiss you see.
Your arms encircle me and pull me to you and our lips meet
In such an explosion of feeling and emotions that we want to keep...
 
I have longed and now I know,
We and the river of love and lust
Together so sweet and full filling we must 
That when we fall so deep into each other
That it is with such a force
That we fall into each other's arms of course...

Onto the bed and we lay so still but miss
Oh stay you say let us look and touch and kiss
Not quite getting enough of each other
Always wanting more of another....

That's how I remember you so full of love.
I do love you and so longing for a man like you.
Yes take me to your island and your bed,
Hold me one last time until we are fed.
Love Me

Brooke Dylan 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 7:13 AM
I hope his whispers led to your screams of passion. This one is sizzling Brooke.
Dylan Avatar
May 29, 2014 at 10:58 PM
LOL... THANKS RICHARD... hugs.. to you
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:54 PM
impressed by your sense of longing so well composed in a pensive way, brooke... huggs
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 1:07 PM
thank you Nette.. nice to see you
Deschler Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Very expressive! The reader can really feel the longing for love coming through in every line. A very passionate and beautiful poem, Brooke!
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Thankyou Kelly.. thanks for that great comment hugs
Lindley Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:49 PM
So sweetly beautiful are your romantic writes my friend. Inspiring even to we old dogs!! A fantastic presentation my friend!
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Thank you so much Robert.. hugs
Bordner Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Mmmm...this is nourishing love want Brooke. To admit such need is strength through love no doubt. Beautiful Art. J.A.B.
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:26 AM
THANK YOU so much Justin... hugs
Johnson Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 8:17 PM
Wow, that's puttin' it on the page. So much passion and longing. Loved it.
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Robert... hugs
Duggan Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Beautiful Brooke, sooooo romantic, wish I could write romantic poems, but I am not that way inclined, I just sit back an enjoy yours. Take care.............Vera............
Dylan Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 2:29 PM
thank you dear Vera... so nice to see you hugs
Street Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Ps., You are amazing girl! Love is but a whisper...You have yourself a pleasant evening..Stay sweet....[ove, Jeremy *
Street Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 1:23 PM
Dip Me In The Cocoa Of Your Love..Let The Honey Amid Your Lips Drip, From Above...Scream My Name Aloud Sip The Velvet From Her Sky....Ssssssh, Relax Now My Darling....Love, Jeremy *
Dylan Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:36 PM
wow Jeremy our comments are blowing me away... hugs..
Shiells Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 10:19 AM
Hi Brooke, WOW. Beautiful and tender and as always it is a joy to read your writes my friend. Well done. Thanks for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
Dylan Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:38 PM
hello Deborah so good to see you my friend.. how are the fires???? I hope things are better
Merrill Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Hi Brooke. I'm a romantic, so I love this write. Let me respond this way: Amami, e' tutto quello che ti chiedo. "Love me, that's all I ask of you." xxx...mel
Dylan Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:26 AM
WOW THANKS MEL... Love your comment..
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