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Whisper My Name

Please whisper my name, Are you waiting at my door?? Whispering, where are you my love once more? My heart beating so that the whole world could hear, Anticipating and longing for your touch so near: Your hand comes through the door reaching for me.. I open the door wanting and longing for your kiss you see. Your arms encircle me and pull me to you and our lips meet In such an explosion of feeling and emotions that we want to keep... I have longed and now I know, We and the river of love and lust Together so sweet and full filling we must That when we fall so deep into each other That it is with such a force That we fall into each other's arms of course... Onto the bed and we lay so still but miss Oh stay you say let us look and touch and kiss Not quite getting enough of each other Always wanting more of another.... That's how I remember you so full of love. I do love you and so longing for a man like you. Yes take me to your island and your bed, Hold me one last time until we are fed. Love Me Brooke Dylan 2014

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Date: 5/29/2014 7:13:00 AM
I hope his whispers led to your screams of passion. This one is sizzling Brooke.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/29/2014 10:58:00 PM
LOL... THANKS RICHARD... hugs.. to you
Date: 5/20/2014 12:54:00 PM
impressed by your sense of longing so well composed in a pensive way, brooke... huggs
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 1:07:00 PM
thank you Nette.. nice to see you
Date: 5/20/2014 12:54:00 AM
Very expressive! The reader can really feel the longing for love coming through in every line. A very passionate and beautiful poem, Brooke!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 10:03:00 AM
Thankyou Kelly.. thanks for that great comment hugs
Date: 5/19/2014 9:49:00 PM
So sweetly beautiful are your romantic writes my friend. Inspiring even to we old dogs!! A fantastic presentation my friend!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert.. hugs
Date: 5/19/2014 8:46:00 PM
Mmmm...this is nourishing love want Brooke. To admit such need is strength through love no doubt. Beautiful Art. J.A.B.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 10:26:00 AM
THANK YOU so much Justin... hugs
Date: 5/19/2014 8:17:00 PM
Wow, that's puttin' it on the page. So much passion and longing. Loved it.
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Robert... hugs
Date: 5/19/2014 7:20:00 PM
Beautiful Brooke, sooooo romantic, wish I could write romantic poems, but I am not that way inclined, I just sit back an enjoy yours. Take care.............Vera............
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/20/2014 2:29:00 PM
thank you dear Vera... so nice to see you hugs
Date: 5/19/2014 7:03:00 PM
Ps., You are amazing girl! Love is but a whisper...You have yourself a pleasant evening..Stay sweet....[ove, Jeremy *
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Date: 5/19/2014 1:23:00 PM
Dip Me In The Cocoa Of Your Love..Let The Honey Amid Your Lips Drip, From Above...Scream My Name Aloud Sip The Velvet From Her Sky....Ssssssh, Relax Now My Darling....Love, Jeremy *
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/19/2014 5:36:00 PM
wow Jeremy our comments are blowing me away... hugs..
Date: 5/19/2014 10:19:00 AM
Hi Brooke, WOW. Beautiful and tender and as always it is a joy to read your writes my friend. Well done. Thanks for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/19/2014 5:38:00 PM
hello Deborah so good to see you my friend.. how are the fires???? I hope things are better
Date: 5/19/2014 1:31:00 AM
Hi Brooke. I'm a romantic, so I love this write. Let me respond this way: Amami, e' tutto quello che ti chiedo. "Love me, that's all I ask of you." xxx...mel
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/19/2014 9:26:00 AM
WOW THANKS MEL... Love your comment..

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