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Whisper Hello To the Evening

Whisper hello to the evening 

~

Autumn echoes call your name
through valleys painted tangerine
Beneath a slowly setting sun
of twilight promises serene

Feel these winds of deep affection 
quivering upon your heart
Whisper hello to the evening
as the daylight does depart

Chasing dreams in silent shadows
neath a moonbeam’s shimmered dance
Soft reflections so alluring
silhouettes in true romance

Sit with me this velvet meadow
while the stars enchant the view
Kiss me soft of endless wonder
know this love I have for you

~

Good night Soupers

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Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 11/26/2018 11:15:00 AM

To know love, is all one needs, beautiful

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 12:27:00 PM

That is so true my friend. Thank you so much.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/25/2018 12:53:00 PM

Hello Chris, this poem is romantic. I agree with Andrea, keep it up. Have a nice day my friend.Peace, Love, Joy.

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:39:00 AM

Thank you so very much Darlene.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/24/2018 9:43:00 PM

---and following up Andrea's comment below, you can keep us men sighing as well. This one is "vintage Chris Green." And it doesn't get much sweeter than that. Best to you always. ~ Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:36:00 AM

Wow, thanks so much GW. I wonder how long it will be before people refer to me as the vintage Chris Green?" : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2018 6:56:00 PM

I believe you are probably the most romantic writer of the male poets here. Keep it up, Chris. Make the ladies sigh!!

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:35:00 AM

Thank you Andrea, What a nice thing to say to me. I appreciate all of the kindness you send my way.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/24/2018 7:23:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Chris . I love it :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:34:00 AM

Thank you Heidi for always being so kind to me

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/23/2018 11:02:00 PM

I got chills, poetry chills and other - oh, you must be well versed from a past life of also being a pen needer. Wow CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:34:00 AM

I think I was a frog in a past life but I am not sure. : ) Thanks so very much CayCay

Phillip Garcia

Date: 11/23/2018 9:39:00 PM

It's a wonderful poem, Chris, very warm and inviting, tremendously done. However, seeing as it's barely 9pm, isn't it a bit early to be saying good night? The night is young and aching for you to squeeze a few more lines out :)

Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Phillip. I can only do so much in a day before I get too tired to continue. : )