Whisper

floating on a log wondering where im going,
hard to see land, absent in knowing.
the days are shorter nights are longer
the memory of u, is still fresh and new
the laughter's i hear, your whispers so loud,
your face i see in mist of a cloud.
you've always bring me joy, not matter the times.
i know your in a such better place,yet selfishness i still find. 
i wish to hold your hand,to lay in you arms.
the feeling of needing you here, keeping me from harm.
i've heard u can still see,for your watching down on me.
the tears at night when i hold my pillow tight. 
the feel of weakness that plays a great part
yet your whispers i still  can hear, and as it comes so clear
that  frown becomes a smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fraser Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Hi Carlitha, welcome to the soup and thanks for posting this great write, sorry you lost someone, blessings, Carl
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November 4, 2013 at 3:03 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, I look forward to enjoying your verse often. Light & Love
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November 3, 2013 at 3:23 PM
I hear what you are saying.... You might like "More Than A Memory." It is found in my portfolio on this site. I believe we use the same ink.... I hope you like it as much as I like yours.... Nice, poignant verse.... Love ya.... Jake
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