Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Verse

Whisper

Waning sun sinks slow, makes
western sky chromatic.
Wings of lured butterflies
whir susurrus of spring,
waking up blooming buds.
Waltzing wind flows past me, 
whispers music of joy.

May 10, 2021
Syllable count  6 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest  Pleiades W
Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Eve Roper May 12, 2021 at 7:41 PM Congratulations on your win, Subimal :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2021 at 2:04 AM - Back with a congratulations, Subimal :) - Have a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman May 11, 2021 at 1:58 PM Subimal, creative portrayal of whisper in nature! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Mystic Rose Rose May 10, 2021 at 6:05 AM Very nicely done,

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2021 at 5:59 AM - Lovely written, with the letter W, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)