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Waning sun sinks slow, makes western sky chromatic. Wings of lured butterflies whir susurrus of spring, waking up blooming buds. Waltzing wind flows past me, whispers music of joy. May 10, 2021 Syllable count 6 per line ( Contest Pleiades W Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Date: 5/12/2021 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal :-)
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Date: 5/12/2021 2:04:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Subimal :) - Have a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:58:00 PM
Subimal, creative portrayal of whisper in nature! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/11/2021 1:34:00 PM
Dear Subimal, these are such graceful phrases... "whir susurrus of spring." Wow, great "W" words. Congratulations on your fine win. Carol Louise
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Date: 5/10/2021 6:05:00 AM
Very nicely done,
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Date: 5/10/2021 5:59:00 AM
- Lovely written, with the letter W, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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