Whisper

Waning sun sinks slow, makes western sky chromatic. Wings of lured butterflies whir susurrus of spring, waking up blooming buds. Waltzing wind flows past me, whispers music of joy. May 10, 2021 Syllable count 6 per line (howmanysyllables.com) Contest Pleiades W Sponsor : Kim Merryman

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2021 7:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Subimal :-)

Sunshine Smile

Date: 5/12/2021 2:04:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Subimal :) - Have a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/11/2021 1:58:00 PM

Subimal, creative portrayal of whisper in nature! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/11/2021 1:34:00 PM

Dear Subimal, these are such graceful phrases... "whir susurrus of spring." Wow, great "W" words. Congratulations on your fine win. Carol Louise

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/10/2021 6:05:00 AM

Very nicely done,

Sunshine Smile

Date: 5/10/2021 5:59:00 AM

- Lovely written, with the letter W, Subimal :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)