Whiskey Wings

ever been whiskey bent and hell bound?
like hank williams junior and those homocidal hounds...
ever talked to yourself and heard mad melodies?
ever talked to the devil and heard sad symphonies?
ever try to fly to heaven on a pair of whiskey wings?

like a bat out of hell...an expansion of evil
that poisonous potient leads south to destruction
i reach for the stars and drown in deceit...like a bird in a cage wearing whiskey wings

like a river of rage...i dive headfirst into wicked water...
vomitting violence at abomination altars
i stumble and i stagger...my many mistakes make me falter
i do mile long lines so i can go further

sound turns to silence...i'm fleeing this scene
i get mixed in the mayhem...wearing whiskey wings

lost in a land of empty bottles and broken dreams...fractured skulls and skeletons swing from nooses on death trees

i eat poisonous fruit from a garden of disease...i can't fly to heaven on whiskey wings

anthony_beesley@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/12/2010 12:49:00 PM
this is the way i like it. you have a subject and you address it. great work. john
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Date: 8/9/2010 11:13:00 AM
I was gone and did not read any poetry the past weekend. So I am trying to get some read today. I am pleased that yours is among what I have read today and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Anthony. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 9:22:00 AM
Hey Anthony: Great poem. Reminds me of the time that I was in the field (U.S. Army) and downed a whole bottle of Old Grand Dad (110 proof), had breakfast and then went 2 work (No hang over...T.G.). Thanks again 4 reading my poems and commenting on them. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:50:00 PM
wowww i feel for this write the person,, and awesome words whiskey wings, sober them up lol maybe youll get there soon
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