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Whiskey Lips So Sublime

Whiskey Lips So Sublime

Whiskey Lips step now over the line of true fire-water,
As a warm-burning brings forward one glowing sign.
The golden mead of sweet mountain dew appears now,
As each golden drop sighs it moment of escape and as 
The alcohol signals and sparks the wildest of spirits in 
One’s own true self! 

This moment of sublime ecstasy excites and sparks your
Deepest inner-spirit and you begin to slur and sing loudly,
As your mind begins to reel from the drunken delight of
Your very own intoxicating breaths—noble, yet stupid,
As you become drunken forever under each psychic sip
You taketh from the deepest pool in the very depths of
Your eternal soul!

Your very eyes now glaze over a breathless message
You have found in the cheapest of whiskey bottles.
Saying a divine prayer to Almighty God Himself, 
You open the bottle cork now and take notice that a
Little genie pops out of nowhere and begins to take all
Three of your mythic wishes granted together into one!

With that, this little genie shall begin dancing and singing
An ancient Irish whiskey song in your presence into the
Wee hours of the morning until you both pass out and fall
Into a drunken stupor with your whiskey lips so sublime!        

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem 
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – July 23, 2018
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Raven Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:40 AM
Hi Liam, a wonderful collaboration by Gary and yourself. This is a little different from you guys. I remember so well the days when I did drink. It was Scottish Whiskey, then Vodka, then tee-total. I like the last one best. I did like this fun write by you both. The images are remembered well guys. Now, i have only one point to make, Scottish Whiskey is the best. Shoot me now. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Bateman Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Hey Liam Mate!! Somehow I know this particular funny poem!! I wonder how (LOL!!). I'm very glad to see that you posted it (finally) on you end!! Great mixing ink with you on this one!! Best Always, Gary
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October 10, 2018 at 5:59 PM
- I do not know the difference between different Whiskey types ... but I know the smell and the taste .... I would rather have a glass of cold water and dance and sing :) - A entertaining and great poem from both of you, Liam & Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Hey Dear Anne-Lise . . . You already know that Liam and I are already "Irish-Blooded Guys," therefore, Whiskey -- Preferably "Irish Whiskey" is very important to us!! LOL!! (This one was a lot of fun to work on with Liam!!) Best Always, Gary
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