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Author's Notes: This is another co-write that Liam McDaid and I had just finished late today under the interesting and hopefully funny title: "Whiskey Lips So Sublime." The backstory theme to this particular poem concerns the soul of a man who is possessed by the "intoxicated spirits." In this case, think the "whiskey spirits." We sincerely hope you enjoy the read and the tongue-in-cheek humor!! (Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid - July 23, 2018) (Free Verse)

Thematic Categories: allegory, celebration, fun, happiness, self, symbolism, and truth.

Whiskey Lips So Sublime Whiskey Lips step now over the line of true fire-water, As a warm-burning brings forward one glowing sign. The golden mead of sweet mountain dew appears now, As each golden drop sighs it moment of escape and as The alcohol signals and sparks the wildest of spirits in One’s own true self! This moment of sublime ecstasy excites and sparks your Deepest inner-spirit and you begin to slur and sing loudly, As your mind begins to reel from the drunken delight of Your very own intoxicating breaths—noble, yet stupid, As you become drunken forever under each psychic sip You taketh from the deepest pool in the very depths of Your eternal soul! Your very eyes now glaze over a breathless message You have found in the cheapest of whiskey bottles. Saying a divine prayer to Almighty God Himself, You open the bottle cork now and take notice that a Little genie pops out of nowhere and begins to take all Three of your mythic wishes granted together into one! With that, this little genie shall begin dancing and singing An ancient Irish whiskey song in your presence into the Wee hours of the morning until you both pass out and fall Into a drunken stupor with your whiskey lips so sublime! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem Copyright © All Rights Reserved – July 23, 2018 (Free Verse)

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/23/2018 11:49:00 AM

Hi Gary, a wonderful, fun write on that old demon Whiskey. I am willing to give Liam and ypourself Guiness but when it comes to Whiskey.......SCOTLAND! I haven't drank for many years now but your collaboration did bring back memories. I have to admit, I loved the way that you both wrote this little gem. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/23/2018 1:49:00 PM

Hello Vlad (Mike)!! Great to hear from you!! I just happen to currently be down in Stuttgart, Germany this week away from my residence in Northern Germany. Regardless, my laptop is with me. I am very pleased that you like this "Whiskey" co-write from Liam and me. I really don't drink much anymore as well, but I still have a glass of wine or whiskey on occasion. BTW, I'm hoping to have my second poetry book manuscript to my publisher by early Spring 2019, with it being released to the public sometime thereafter. I will keep you apprised!! Best, Gary

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/26/2018 8:31:00 AM

Love it! You guys are masters at composing.. I myself once took a special interest in sampling fine whiskey. Bravo! You and Liam have created a true beauty with his one. A fav..

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/26/2018 8:46:00 AM

Hello Robert!! Many Thanks to you, as always, for your read and for your very gracious comments -- and for the FAV too!! This one was as very special verse written, of course, tongue-in-cheek. I am probably the more dedicated whiskey drinker than Liam. This poem helps to reflect the Irish heritage of both of its author's!! LOL!! Best Wishes to you and your family!! Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/24/2018 8:56:00 AM

also i would like to thank everyone for the heartfelt comments wishing you all a blessed week

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/25/2018 2:32:00 PM

Thanks for other note here Liam to everyone else who reads our noble whiskey spoof here!! Be Careful: "The Little Genie" is now on the loose!! (LOL!!) Best Wishes, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/24/2018 8:52:00 AM

Gary this brought a big smile having been of the drink for years thinking back your pen pal intoxicated this piece very beautifully always a deep pleasure mixing ink with you pal

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/25/2018 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Liam Mate!! Looks like our mutual mixture of whiskey and ink on this one brought our "Little Genie" friend to life. Always my great pleasure too, to work with you when we can work in a co-write or two together. Best Always Pal!! Gary

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/23/2018 7:15:00 PM

A super collaboration; kudos guys.

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/25/2018 2:23:00 PM

Hello MLK!! Thanks on behalf of both Liam and me!! Very Pleased you enjoyed our dive here into the world of Irish Whiskey. Best Always, Gary

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/23/2018 5:19:00 PM

Everything about this poem is true...may I pour another whisky for you... It's magical to the point of detrimental...Congrats to both of you...I enjoyed it...

Gary Bateman
Date: 7/25/2018 2:21:00 PM

Hello Arturo, Thanks for your read and great comment here. This was written, of course, as a joke. However, with Liam being full-blooded Irish and with my being part Irish through my Mother's family -- we both do enjoy some whiskey now and then. (I can speak for myself for sure on that!!) And so -- don't be afraid to have a glass!! LOL!! Cheers, Gary