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Whiskey and Koolaid

All that water and nothing to drink Oceans surround us but too salty methinks This dilemma makes us afraid So whiskey and even koolaid Fills in quite nicely, but your hooha shrinks

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Silent One

Date: 11/14/2017 4:34:00 PM

HaHa!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 4:43:00 PM

Happy to have you as a Soup friend SO!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/14/2017 8:44:00 AM

Even boards need a shrink//(A paraphrase which stinks)//I'd be afraid//to drink cool aid//down in Jonestown methinks. HOOHA AWAY JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 9:06:00 AM

Aww I remember Jonestown with fond terror! Those were the days eh! Mass Koolaid consumption! Too much of anything is not good!!! HOOHA TO YOU TOO!!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/14/2017 7:09:00 AM

LOL!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2017 7:20:00 AM

Silly rh... giggle on! It's good for your soul!!! Lovesies, Jack xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/14/2017 6:16:00 AM

I bet your hooha stinks, If your life is by the sink, don't try to dry, your daft wet fly, Your not as small as you think! Ah, you are still inspiring me to think of crazy but fun pieces...thank you for making me write quite delightful poetry as your poems are ever so much greater than my little daft poems! I really loved reading your fantastic piece here this morning! What a grand write, Great Work my friend!!