Whiskey

Whiskey

Lovely Liz

With pen and paper I write, spilled blood upon notions of things wanted and so damn far away.
We secretly abated love and you became my wish to behold. I wanted you. To taste your lips like  the Crown Royal whiskey. Slow and easy.

You called me honey, sweetie and dear. I called you my dark mistress, my haunting mademoiselle and endearing perfect beauty.

We pro-longed deep and long kisses. Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow.
My lovely Liz. I want us to run away and I want to know your secret places and learn glimpse of the storm you try to hold in. I see in your eyes. Tamed life starving for the midnight dance and I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

We danced once the deadly dance of free love and we exposed real skin and voice.
Sadly we accepted less dear Liz.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun. I pray you know laughter and you will dance the magic movement of where lovers. Know the wildness and freedom of hiding nothing and showing real skin and real face.

John Castellenas/Coyote

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/10/2020 6:29:00 PM
Hello John … romance and then memories to keep on lost love. Nice work again John - Lindsay
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John Castellenas
Date: 9/12/2020 2:13:00 AM
Thank you dear Lindsay. When love is wild and dangerous. Best days of our life.
Date: 4/18/2019 11:20:00 AM
John! Last line is best to me Know the wildness and the freedom of hiding nothing and showing real skin and face! Advice, I think..for anyone,... Nothing like being full out youL Great poem. Panagiota
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:24:00 AM
I love the way you unloose the pen with ink and write from your heart, Beautiful !
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John Castellenas
Date: 3/5/2019 5:29:00 AM
Thank you Pixie. I appreciate the comment.
Date: 11/13/2018 12:28:00 PM
Hello John, I love this poem you created. have a nice day my friend.
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John Castellenas
Date: 3/5/2019 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Darlene. I appreciate the comment.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/22/2018 1:56:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. merry Christmas and a Happy New year.
Date: 9/24/2018 3:48:00 PM
You penned a beauty!
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John Castellenas
Date: 3/5/2019 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
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