Carole Duet Poet Lyric

Whirlwind - Revised With Music

Caught up in a whirlwind, 
whirling and twirling, 
Caught up in a whirlwind 
tossing and turning, 


REFRAIN: 
churning and burning inside my heart. 
tumbled and tossed in a lovers' whirlwind. 
take me away 

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Caught up in a daydream, 
wanting and needing, 
Caught up in a daydream, 
loving and lusting,. 

REFRAIN: 
churning and burning inside my heart. 
tumbled and tossed in a lovers' whirlwind. 
take me away 
take me away

Caught up in a love snare, 
hoping and thinking 
Caught up in a love snare, 
reeling with feeling 

REFRAIN: 
churning and burning inside my heart. 
tumbled and tossed in a lovers' whirlwind. 
take me away 
take me away
take me away
take me away
take me away
take me away
away
away
away
away
away
take me away....

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Maria Williams July 11, 2017 at 6:38 AM How wonderful is this Carole? The lyrics, the music, the singer. In a word Awesome. You are indeed a very talented woman. Bravo... Maria Carole Duet July 13, 2017 at 12:20 AM Thank you so much, Maria. I love music and I'm glad you liked this one. Carole Duet

Robert Lindley April 24, 2017 at 10:20 PM JUST LISTENED TO THIS EPIC BEAUTY BEING SUNG. CONGRATS ON CREATING THIS GEM MY FRIEND! Bravo!!! Carole Duet April 24, 2017 at 11:34 PM Well thank you so so much, Robert. I love music and I very much enjoy this aspect of writing poetry. And, Mark Massey wrote and sang the music for me. Couldn't have done it without him.

Roy Pett April 16, 2017 at 10:18 AM Brilliant poem Carole, look forward to hearing this piece when you set it to music, good luck in contest. :)) Carole Duet April 16, 2017 at 10:04 PM Thank you so much, Roy. I can't wait! Carole Duet

Robert Lindley April 13, 2017 at 4:51 PM Top class work my friend. I can see that fine piece set to music and flowing along.. Great melody!! Carole Duet April 26, 2017 at 1:41 PM Thanks for listening to the song, Robert. So glad you liked it...and yes, Mark is a "fine singer". He has such feeling in his vocals. He also played the guitar on this piece as well as my others. Carole Duet Carole Duet April 26, 2017 at 1:34 PM Thanks for listening to the song, Robert. So glad you liked it...and yes, Mark is a "fine singer". He has such feeling in his vocals. He also played the guitar on this piece as well as my others. Carole Duet Carole Duet April 26, 2017 at 1:32 PM Thanks for listening to the song, Robert. So glad you liked it...and yes, Mark is a "fine singer". He has such feeling in his vocals. He also played the guitar on this piece as well as my others. Carole Duet Robert Lindley April 24, 2017 at 10:21 PM I was lucky to check tonight and find this gem recorded into a great song. Congrats to you and the fine singer both... Carole Duet April 13, 2017 at 11:53 PM Thanks, Robert. I really appreciate that. I can't wait to make it into a song! Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2017 at 7:06 PM very nice and now I know why you are called DUET!! Carole Duet April 12, 2017 at 11:03 AM Thanks, Andrea. Yes, I love music and it will be set to music soon...but it won't be a Carol or a Duet. lol

Chris Green April 11, 2017 at 7:24 AM I love this, the words have a melody all their own. I would really enjoy hearing the music you had in mind when you wrote this wonderful piece. Carole Duet April 12, 2017 at 11:01 AM Thank you, Chris. It is meant for music but I'm not the musician that Mark Massey is. He will set it to music for me. So...stand by. It's coming. Carole

Darren White April 11, 2017 at 1:40 AM I hear this set to music indeed, it's absolutely beautiful :) I love your daydream in a whirlwind.... Carole Duet April 12, 2017 at 10:59 AM Thank you so much, Darren. I can't wait to put it to music. Carole

Vladislav Raven April 11, 2017 at 1:17 AM Hi Carole, set to the proper music this could be such a wonderful song. The words truly sing off the page. A "Whirlwind" of majestic words. This has to be a seven for sure. Hugs....Mike. XX Carole Duet April 12, 2017 at 10:58 AM Hi Mike and thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Very encouraging. Music to come....Carole xx

White Wolf April 11, 2017 at 12:03 AM Great to see you churning out more tunes, can't wait to hear this to music! Awesome! Carole Duet April 12, 2017 at 10:55 AM Thank you, Budgie. I can't wait either. It is so much fun.

Charlie Smith April 10, 2017 at 8:59 PM Wonderful Carol, set it to music... Carole Duet April 10, 2017 at 9:05 PM Thank you, Charlie. I will! Carole Duet

Arthur Vaso April 10, 2017 at 7:14 PM I can imagine this too music, lovely! Carole Duet April 10, 2017 at 8:53 PM Thanks, Arthur! That's the plan... :-)