Whirlwind

Rotations in high speed air showing so much anger with groans and grudges clearly heard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Skelly Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Pleased to find another poet who appreciates haiku and clearly enjoys the challenge of condensing thoughts into three short lines. Delice
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Thank you very much Delice
Maverick Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 1:53 PM
Good to follow the feeling you put in here Funom, keep on giving out..'
Makama Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Its pleasant to know you enjoy my lines... Fully well appreciated my poetic friend
Hunjeri Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 1:23 AM
Awesome strong personification.
Makama Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 8:15 AM
Yeah njeri.. Thanks for stopping by
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:24 PM
I like the idea of comparing its sound to groans and grudges.
Makama Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Thank you Andrea for your pleasant observation
Kiser Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM
This was a magnificent Haiku; I can feel that whirlwind.
Makama Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 11:05 AM
Thank you so much Kiser
Andresen Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:54 PM
- Nature power !!! - Well done, Funom ! - // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise
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