Whirlwind

Rotations in high speed air showing so much anger with groans and grudges clearly heard

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 5/11/2015 11:50:00 AM

Pleased to find another poet who appreciates haiku and clearly enjoys the challenge of condensing thoughts into three short lines. Delice

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 10:14:00 AM

Thank you very much Delice

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/29/2015 1:53:00 PM

Good to follow the feeling you put in here Funom, keep on giving out..'

Funom Makama
Date: 4/1/2015 8:16:00 AM

Its pleasant to know you enjoy my lines... Fully well appreciated my poetic friend

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/29/2015 1:23:00 AM

Awesome strong personification.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/1/2015 8:15:00 AM

Yeah njeri.. Thanks for stopping by

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2015 11:24:00 PM

I like the idea of comparing its sound to groans and grudges.

Funom Makama
Date: 4/1/2015 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for your pleasant observation

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/24/2015 8:55:00 AM

This was a magnificent Haiku; I can feel that whirlwind.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/26/2015 11:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Kiser

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2015 1:54:00 PM

- Nature power !!! - Well done, Funom ! - // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2015 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne Lise