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Whirlpools

Happy times we will always remember. But it's the tragedies that really thrive in our heads, that feed on our pain, our guilt, until we surrender. The hurt, the remorse that all of us have felt, suck us under like the whirlpools that are our feelings. That stop us from seeing the light, that stop us from growing and stop us from healing. We all give up, we think we don't need to fight. When all that is doing is stopping us from continuing on the confusing path that is life.

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Date: 2/23/2014 4:20:00 PM
Tabatha a big welcome, stop and see the light, it is there you just have to see it...David
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:27:00 PM
Tabatha, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:37:00 AM
Tabatha welcome to the soup, this is a very true piece of work, we all have good memories but the odd bad one seems to linger, I like it...David
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Date: 2/12/2014 3:50:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tabatha- I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2014 6:19:00 PM
Hello Tabatha , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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