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Whirlpool of Colours

Whirlpool of colors




Beguiled by vibrant colors butterfly flutters in perplexity.




Written Feb 22nd, 2016
For contest "Monoku #8" by PD A

beautybutterflycolormonoku

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Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2016 at 6:45 PM

love those t alliterations at the end!! Congrats on your win

Vladislav Raven

March 13, 2016 at 11:38 AM

Hi Dr, Upma, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. The words do sing. I Love the different visions your words can conjure in my mind. A seven from me....Vlad.

Paul Callus

March 13, 2016 at 5:28 AM

...back with merited congratulations, Upma...well done! ~ Regards // paul

Poet Destroyer A

March 12, 2016 at 8:48 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA

Elaine George

February 23, 2016 at 11:36 AM

Beautiful Monoku, Dr. Upma. Elaine

Andrea Dietrich

February 22, 2016 at 3:20 PM

cute one!! I like the alliteration.

Shadow Hamilton

February 22, 2016 at 1:14 PM

superb Dr Upma you have perfectly portrayed a butterfly hugs 7

Sara Kendrick

February 22, 2016 at 7:54 AM

It is amazing how they have certain plants that they are attracted to enjoy..Great work..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 22, 2016 at 7:31 AM

This morning on my roof garden I took a picture of a butterfly on a flower, therefore, I see your wonderful monoku alive before my eyes! Excellent. Good luck, Dr. Upma!

Paul Callus

February 22, 2016 at 6:11 AM

This vibrantly beguiles my attention, Upma!! Fluttering in perplexity is very creative! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul

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