Whirlpool of Colours

Whirlpool of colors




Beguiled by vibrant colors butterfly flutters in perplexity.




Written Feb 22nd, 2016
For contest "Monoku #8" by PD A

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/13/2016 6:45:00 PM
love those t alliterations at the end!! Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:38:00 AM
Hi Dr, Upma, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. The words do sing. I Love the different visions your words can conjure in my mind. A seven from me....Vlad.
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Date: 3/13/2016 5:28:00 AM
...back with merited congratulations, Upma...well done! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/12/2016 8:48:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/23/2016 11:36:00 AM
Beautiful Monoku, Dr. Upma. Elaine
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Date: 2/22/2016 3:20:00 PM
cute one!! I like the alliteration.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:14:00 PM
superb Dr Upma you have perfectly portrayed a butterfly hugs 7
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Date: 2/22/2016 7:54:00 AM
It is amazing how they have certain plants that they are attracted to enjoy..Great work..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/22/2016 7:31:00 AM
This morning on my roof garden I took a picture of a butterfly on a flower, therefore, I see your wonderful monoku alive before my eyes! Excellent. Good luck, Dr. Upma!
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Date: 2/22/2016 6:11:00 AM
This vibrantly beguiles my attention, Upma!! Fluttering in perplexity is very creative! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
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