Whirlpool
Whirlpool
I knew from the moment you smiled
Somehow, I knew you were going to be wild
You took my heart in the first moment
I wanted to run but I knew I mustn’t
You became a whirlpool
And my chances became miniscule
You were drawing me even closer
Then everything became a blur
I awoke the next day
And I really did want to get away
But, I really fell totally in love
And that was all I could think of
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