Whirled Peas

What if the country we're bombin, 
was bombin us instead? 
There wouldn't be a road left 
to stop and rest our head!

Some say it's an Intense WAR, 
just phrased as "Mighty Sad" 
Wonder if we're the Good Guys 
Or possibly the Bad?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Santiago Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 3:48 PM
Love this !
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:53 PM
A great question posed..I know that attacks on other countries for whatever reason is really hard on the general civilian population..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:51 PM
The boot's on the other foot springs to mind Judy - thought provoking write - 7:-) Hugs Jan xx
Das Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Wow this is impressive. Seen from a different perspective 7.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace