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Whirl of Fire


Air temperature
Vertical vorticity
Acquired for fire whirl



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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2009

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September 6, 2009 at 5:04 AM

You glide on one page and vortex on the next I love that about your writing James truely splendid :) love Jayne x x thanks again for the comments on my poems :)

James Peranteau

September 2, 2009 at 6:32 PM

Awesome Haiku James ! Very vivid ! james

Carolyn Devonshire

September 2, 2009 at 5:32 PM

Excellent! Scientific and very vivid! Love, Carolyn

September 2, 2009 at 5:27 PM

Plenty of that going on in California this week James, Sincerely Moses

September 2, 2009 at 2:26 PM

Interesting haiku James, nice work as always...Raul

September 2, 2009 at 2:08 PM

The rhythmic feel of your words works well. Nice use of alliteration. Nice one! Karen

September 2, 2009 at 2:07 PM

I can see, hear, and feel the flames. Glad I'm not the fireperson. Sara

James Marshall Goff

September 2, 2009 at 2:01 PM

speaks to the wildfires in Ca. James! nice!...jim

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