Whirl of Fire

Air temperature Vertical vorticity Acquired for fire whirl http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature.php

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 9/6/2009 5:04:00 AM

You glide on one page and vortex on the next I love that about your writing James truely splendid :) love Jayne x x thanks again for the comments on my poems :)

James Peranteau

Date: 9/2/2009 6:32:00 PM

Awesome Haiku James ! Very vivid ! james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/2/2009 5:32:00 PM

Excellent! Scientific and very vivid! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 9/2/2009 5:27:00 PM

Plenty of that going on in California this week James, Sincerely Moses

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/2/2009 2:26:00 PM

Interesting haiku James, nice work as always...Raul

Date: 9/2/2009 2:08:00 PM

The rhythmic feel of your words works well. Nice use of alliteration. Nice one! Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2009 2:07:00 PM

I can see, hear, and feel the flames. Glad I'm not the fireperson. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/2/2009 2:01:00 PM

speaks to the wildfires in Ca. James! nice!...jim