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Whipping

black ink shapes skitter in the road shade in the tree shade under bushes into the dark no streetlight transform to running ink lines whipping whipping away from the light so fast eyes are deceived yet every night under the moon ink shapes skitter and shiver in place race past all we know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/16/2011 6:02:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Veronica. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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