Whip Cream It Is But a Dream

Whip cream listing makes all things better
in this cream and air is the life of mystery
Some add it to pies and cakes but others play with it
It will give you pleasure when place on ice cream with cherries
open your mouth lick at first then take a bite if you like
whip cream could it be just a dream
I know some would scream for whip cream
on chocolate it is devine take the can and squirt it into you mouth
it is the best no doubt 
Placed in the hand it is cold to the touch but it will delight
You can smear it on a date  if you dare 
With this whip cream it is truly what you dream
In your mine it becomes what will nobody minds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/24/2014 10:48:00 PM
I love it, Patricia. What a witty write - you are really good at this! Bravo - Pandita
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Date: 6/19/2014 4:06:00 PM
Congrats on your winning..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2014 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win in the subject listing contest, Marla
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Date: 6/17/2014 9:47:00 PM
My whipped cream comes straight from the cow. No can involved. It is so good with fresh strawberries in the spring. congratulations on your win with this tempting piece. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/17/2014 1:48:00 PM
Hi Marla, I saw by your first line you were confused about the rules and didn't use your five items or the correct title. However, it is a wonderful tribute to whip cream. Congratulations on your win. Sorry for the late results, thanks much for entering my contest.
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